Hey all!
After the comments received by several reviewers I have tweaked the mission objectives to give CinderWisp more autonomy, updated some text issues that were there, updated mission text and contact text to help keep RPers invested, fixed some weaker plot points, added clues, and adjusted the final level to not be as large. I also updated the title to reflect that this mission is part of a trilogy. As always I appreciate you taking the time to check it out and give feedback. My storytelling abilities thank you profusely!
-Morganical