Office Attack (Arc ID 18820)

[MaldrakBK]

Just made my first AE mission.  Hoping I can get folks to try it and let me know if anything can be better, what I can improve/edit.

 

I appreciate any help anyone can give me.

[Kyksie]

This is a simple one mission arc, where a dude tells you some terrorists have taken over an office and he can't afford their ransom demands, which implies that you, the player, must work for cheap, maybe for ten bucks and a hot dog or something. Anyway, we go into an office and encounter "terrorists", a custom group with varied powersets but generic bios. The player needs to clear out the map, disarm four bombs, and rescue two hostages, which is kind of a lot. He should have at least given me a Coke to wash down the hot dog.

 

There's nothing wrong with Office Attack, it's just very bland and low effort. No clues, no contact bio, very little mob chatter.

[MaldrakBK]

Thanks for the critique.  I will admit that I haven't done nearly enough with the enemies, mostly because I wanted to get into the gameplay portion to learn that, but I will go back and flesh it out some.