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[srmalloy]

The northernmost of the Bicentennial plaques in Independence Port begins "Paragon's involvement in World War 2 began on December 7, 1941, when Nazi German supersoldiers struck Independence Port." Unless Paragon City's history changes the entire history of WWII, Hitler didn't declare war on the US until December 10, 1941, doing so as a response to the US declaring war against Japan on December 8^th, so arranging to have supersoldiers attacking Paragon City the same day as Imperial Japan struck Pearl Harbor would have required Japan to have revealed their plans to Germany, breaking the secrecy of 'Operation Z' (the planning for the Pearl Harbor attack), and attacking on the 7th, prior to Germany declaring war against the US, would have created the same outrage against the Reich as the Pearl Harbor attack did against Japan. The text of this plaque should be changed to have a date of December 10^th or later -- as much as two weeks later, to allow the supersoldiers to be transported to the US coast, unless Hitler had advance knowledge of the attack to be able to pre-position the supersoldiers.

[LuckyDuck]

tiny one, from inside the Brickstown PD.

 

 

Quote

PPD Sergeant: He's gotta come around sonner or later.

 

Edited November 23 by LuckyDuck
emphasis

[Rudra]

In the Rescue the Auction House Workers mission (edt: from Dr. Ann-Marie Engles), the rescued beat cop gives you a ledger. It says:

 

 The beat cop you rescued found this ledger in the auction house office. It shows that a number of expensive relics that been moved through this auction house. The profit from these sales has been channeled to an unnamed source. The funds from the last few transaction haven't been moved yet; they are still in the company's accounts.

 

There should be a "have" between the "that" and "been" so it reads as follows:

 

 The beat cop you rescued found this ledger in the auction house office. It shows that a number of expensive relics that have been moved through this auction house. The profit from these sales has been channeled to an unnamed source. The funds from the last few transaction haven't been moved yet; they are still in the company's accounts.

Edited Tuesday at 12:24 AM by Rudra

[srmalloy]

When you're at the holocostume vendor and open the window to buy or convert aether, the menu still shows "Monstrous Aether Conversion", instead of "Unstable Aether Conversion". The actual conversion selection does show 'Unstable Aether', however.

[Ukase]

When you defeat the mino, you're asked if you want prismatic and monstrous aethers, instead of the new name, Unstable Aethers. On the reward table that pops up. Sorry I didn't take a screen shot. Got ported into the Font and had to pay attention. 

[mtharr]

Coule this Coming Storm, found this typo in the new story arc

[Kai Moon]

Not a specific typo report, but wanted to let folks here know about a related project at Homecoming Wiki.

https://homecoming.wiki/wiki/Category:In-game_text_errors

[ninja surprise]

Firstly I want to say this Ashling Corlett arc from Issue 28 Page 1 is fun!

Second, in the optional dialog with Vulcannon she might mean to say "I don't know how to say this" but the "how" is missing.

https://homecoming.wiki/wiki/Ashling_Corlett#Finale:_Consequences

 

 

[Brakian]

In Dap-Dap's arc on the Rescue Melanie mission:

"breath" should be "breathe"

[Rudra]

This isn't a typo, but I felt this was best served being posted here. In the Tsoo Shenanigans arc from Vitaly Cherenko, you have to go see Wyatt Anderson. When you reach Wyatt, he tells you "You're right, this drug is packaged exactly like Superadine. But it isn't. It's Rage. The Tsoo have been manufacturing Rage lately; they're hoping it will become the new drug of choice. Let me tell you, you don't want to mix the two. It would cause a massive chemical imbalance in the brain, turning you into an berserk killing machine. Oh, I almost forgot; Vitaly Cherenko called me. Apparently Vitaly Cherenko wants a look at some artifact you recovered from the Outcasts. Vitaly Cherenko said you should get it to him without delay."

 

This has to be the most disjointed, mechanical sounding dialogue in the game. I request replacing the last two "Vitaly Cherenko"s with ""he". (Also, the "an berserk" should be "a berserk". So I guess there is a typo after all.) That would make it read as:

 

"You're right, this drug is packaged exactly like Superadine. But it isn't. It's Rage. The Tsoo have been manufacturing Rage lately; they're hoping it will become the new drug of choice. Let me tell you, you don't want to mix the two. It would cause a massive chemical imbalance in the brain, turning you into a berserk killing machine. Oh, I almost forgot; Vitaly Cherenko called me. Apparently he wants a look at some artifact you recovered from the Outcasts. He said you should get it to him without delay."

[CraterLabs]

In the first mission of Viridian's Council of Evil arc ("Capture Sebastien Frost") you get a clue with a typo: it says "These plain white invitations bears a short message" when it should say "These plain white invitations bear a short message".

[Lockely]

Blind Makwa, the turn-in text after this second mission, is missing a space after the player's name. 

 

[worg]

Erin West quests.  this one in s the Hold a Press Conference mission.

When you click on the podium, the following list of options appears.  "Boredom" is spelled incorrectly in the third option.

[worg]

Continuing in the Erin West arc, and also in the Press Conference mission...

Commodation isn't a thing.  "Commendation" is the right word.

[worg]

This one isn't technically a typo, just...  weird.

Nevermind.  Not a typo.  Jumped the gun reporting.

Edited 15 hours ago by worg
Not an actual typo.