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Trilogy (Night Ward), Book the First, Chapter 1: "They knew nothing outside the valley they grew up in, occasionally a salesman would come to town with stories of the big cities and their super powered beings saving the day or causing havoc." Semi-colon, not a comma.

 

Fireball (Night Ward), "Hermit Spells". All the clues in this story lack a trailing full stop, as does the debrief message "Great job, Character. We can begin the process of moving the spells into these items immediately".

 

Fireball (Night Ward), "Take down Dispel Magic": compass clue refers to "Dispell Magic".

 

Fireball (Twignapping): "Oh man oh man! Those low down Black Knights. I knew we couldn't trust them! One of our Embodiments, spells that live inside magic objects has been taken by them. I need you to get him back!" - comma after "objects".

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On 12/28/2019 at 9:24 PM, GM Widower said:

Feel free to post all the typos you find in game here. Please try to avoid duplicate reports. No, this is not serious enough to get you Bug Hunter.

“If they can their hands on one” is missing a ‘get’. This is Allison King’s mission in Brickstown.

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Fireball (Night Ward), "Whoa", "Talk to Cee Baller"; Cee Baller repeatedly refers to another plane of "existance". "Existence". "I can discern what plane of existance it occurred on, if you which to take a portal to that plane we can learn exactly what happened, and if it can happen again." - "wish", not "which", and semicolon after "occurred on".

 

Fireball, "True Colors"; much dialogue with the Zygote is missing full stops. Debrief says "I can guarentee that" - "guarantee".

 

Silver Mantis SF, end of mission 1: "You defeated both sides leaders and captured the tattoo artists!" - "sides' leaders".

 

"Shut down Freaks and stop Sky Raiders", briefing: "The Freaks have set up shop in an un-used office building" - "unused". "Black Scorpions orders are to make sure that doesn't happen, and I want to see those orders carried out by shutting down everything and leaving it in ruin" - "Black Scorpion's".

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On 12/28/2019 at 9:24 PM, GM Widower said:

Feel free to post all the typos you find in game here. Please try to avoid duplicate reports. No, this is not serious enough to get you Bug Hunter.

Bpones?

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Slot Machine, Miss Fortune's Wheel, first mish intro:

'The wheels click into place, and the machine began to blare noise from it's speakers'

 

Also, in the description of the slot machine:

'Maybe it's the fact that no one else ever goes near the machine, or how the glowing orange light of it's screen sometimes turns blood-red,'

and

'and as it's lights flash and it's bells ring'

 

Wow, I think I hit the jackpot on this one.

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Contact: Interrogator Kang

Mission: Sacrifices Must Be Made Part II: Finders Keepers

 

Text: 2nd para, 2nd sent: "Luckily your provided..."

Correction: "your" should be "you" or "you've"

 

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Dislike certain sounds? Head down to Silence/Modify specific sounds in Guides.

"You keep using that word, I do not think it means what you think it means."

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Found a typo in the Souvenir text of Project Fury:

 

In the last paragraph, I'm pretty sure that 'seizing' should be 'ceasing'.

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As a general observation, if I were fixing these, I would find it much easier to do so with even a relatively small verbatim text quote from the game than a large image. I'm not particularly singling out the previous poster, just using it as an example: even the string "up seizing investigations" as text would be more useful than that entire image.

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Starting the 3rd part of Who Will Die?, the clue for Marshall Blitz ends in... confusion?

 

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"We have Rogue performed"? wat

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On 12/28/2019 at 9:24 PM, GM Widower said:

Feel free to post all the typos you find in game here. Please try to avoid duplicate reports. No, this is not serious enough to get you Bug Hunter.

“Thier” Marcus Cole should be Their.

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Found a couple of typos in the Souvenir 'Lost and Found'

 

The first sentence currently reads:

"Timothy Raymond was once a normal man, as normal as anyone can be in the Rouge Isles"

That should be 'Rogue Isles'.

 

In the second paragraph of the same souvenir, second sentence:

"He makes your on anger rise just by standing next to him."

Should be: own.

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On the "Track Down James Harvan" mission of Pandora's Box part 2:

 

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Dr. Harvan seems at a loss for words...

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Hard Luck, Breaking the Streak, Take Down Luckless mish intro text:

 

'The moron thought he could hide from Giza security by seeking shelter from the Carnival.'

should be

'The moron thought he could hide from Giza security by seeking shelter with the Carnival.'

or maybe

'The moron thought he could hide from Giza security by seeking shelter from us with the Carnival.'

 

He's being protected by the Carnies while hiding from Johnny Sonata's forces.

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Senator Aquila mish, Julia Pria dialogue:

'Each morning, the sounds of tradesmen and townsfolk hawking their wares and haggling each other could be heard across the city.'

should be

'Each morning, the sounds of tradesmen and townsfolk hawking their wares and haggling with each other could be heard across the city.'

 

The version of haggle that means to negotiate or bargain is not a transitive verb.

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Souvenir text: Coral Bonanza

 

Paragraph 3: "But she was curious about"

Sentence ends prematurely - suggest it should be: "But she was curious about them."

Also Parapgraph 3: "She sent you to the famed vodoun master,"

Vodoun is a proper noun; this should be capitalised.

 

Edited by mrata
Typo in souvenir (slightly ironic for this thread!)

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Kelly Uqua background info text:

 

'Crey moved her to their offices in the Rogue Isles, where she's been making friends with it's less scrupulous metahuman community.'

 

should be

 

'Crey moved her to their offices in the Rogue Isles, where she's been making friends with its less scrupulous metahuman community.'

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Dream Doctor, "Find David Hazen's Missing Journal": "[NPC] Ancient of Frost: You attacked many of us, Scirocco. But you can not defeat us all. We will thrive on your pain before you're taken by Mot." "can not" should be "cannot".

 

Dream Doctor, "Stop Mot from Devouring the World": "[Caption] People of the world, today we make the choice of hope, and that is something Mot can NOT take away, that Mot CAN NOT DEFEAT!" Same "can not" / "cannot" confusion (twice).

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