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Should be "Your objective".

 

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Should be "I'm actually a big fan".

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Who Will Die?, Vladimir Zolner, Part II: Believers, mish debrief:

 

'Group is getting bigger everyday by luring in people who are more and more influential.'

 

should be

 

'Group is getting bigger every day by luring in people who are more and more influential.'

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Johnny Sonata arc in St. Martial.

 

Mission name is Interrogate Librarian Engrat.

 

The mission sent me to Nerva but when you zone in the mission pop up box says you are actually underneath St. Martial in a cave.

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On 12/28/2019 at 9:24 PM, GM Widower said:

Feel free to post all the typos you find in game here. Please try to avoid duplicate reports. No, this is not serious enough to get you Bug Hunter.

I admit, this one made me twitch. I ‘sought’ him out.

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Sunstorm, Capture Council research in Troll Tunnels, clues from glowies:

 

(Basic N-Fragment utilization):

 

'This report gives a breif overview of how normal Nictus Fragments can be used.'

 

should be

 

'This report gives a brief overview of how normal Nictus Fragments can be used.'

 

(Altered N-Fragment Uses):

 

'This report gives a breif overview of how normal Nictus Fragments can be altered using quantum energy techniques.'

 

should be

 

'This report gives a brief overview of how normal Nictus Fragments can be altered using quantum energy techniques.'

 

And in the mish debriefing Sunstorm says:

 

'SERAPH will be pouring through this for months.'

 

should be

 

'SERAPH will be poring through this for months.'

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Overheard while flying across the Hollows:

 

[NPC] Gravedigger Slugger: Fine. I don't care that you're wining. Later we'll play cards and I will squash you.

 

That should be 'winning'.

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Lt. Krieg says some weird lines here. This is Lt. Demitrovich's mission, called "Defeat Lt. Krieg and crew".

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On the Morality Mission "Hold Mitsumoto Hagashi hostage!" The following text can be seen when you are at the part where you arm the bombs to kill Hagashi.

 

You begin to arm the bomb!
You have disarmed the bomb.

 

I did not disarm the bomb; I armed the bomb!

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Researcher Badge, Plaque 4 (Echo: DA):

 

'While Mayor 'Spanky' Rabinowitz was no paragon of virtue, it cannot be argued that Paragon City prospered under his guidance. Historians cannot account for this. Some have theorized that Spanky had some sort of mystical power on his side; it has even been theorized that he sold his soul to a demon in exchange for the city's well-being.'

 

should be

 

'While Mayor 'Spanky' Rabinowitz was no paragon of virtue, it cannot be disputed that Paragon City prospered under his guidance.'

 

or

 

'While Mayor 'Spanky' Rabinowitz was no paragon of virtue, it cannot be argued with that Paragon City prospered under his guidance.'

 

but that second one is kinda clunky.  The current text, however, means the opposite of the intended meaning: if you can't argue that the city prospered, that means all the evidence shows it did not prosper.  The rest of the text clearly indicates it did.

 

 

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1 hour ago, Cinnder said:

Researcher Badge, Plaque 4 (Echo: DA):

 

'While Mayor 'Spanky' Rabinowitz was no paragon of virtue, it cannot be argued that Paragon City prospered under his guidance. Historians cannot account for this. Some have theorized that Spanky had some sort of mystical power on his side; it has even been theorized that he sold his soul to a demon in exchange for the city's well-being.'

 

should be

 

'While Mayor 'Spanky' Rabinowitz was no paragon of virtue, it cannot be disputed that Paragon City prospered under his guidance.'

 

or

 

'While Mayor 'Spanky' Rabinowitz was no paragon of virtue, it cannot be argued with that Paragon City prospered under his guidance.'

 

but that second one is kinda clunky.  The current text, however, means the opposite of the intended meaning: if you can't argue that the city prospered, that means all the evidence shows it did not prosper.  The rest of the text clearly indicates it did.

 

 

or "it is inarguable that Paragon City prospered"

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Phillipa Meraux, Investigate the cave where the Lost may be storing the stolen technology, Lost holy text clue:

 

'You can imagine the downtrodden Lost pouring over this manuscript in wonder'

 

should be

 

'You can imagine the downtrodden Lost poring over this manuscript in wonder'

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Restless Badge:

 

'Graveyards litter the Bay, but Shivans and Banished Panteon alike keep mourners from visiting their passed loved ones.'

 

should be

 

'Graveyards litter the Bay, but Shivans and Banished Pantheon alike keep mourners from visiting their passed loved ones.'

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Angelo Vendetti's dialogue when you accept his first mission to capture Archon Winters:

The Council call their leaders Archons, and most Council bases are led by one. I found out that Archon Winters, the leader of one of the local bases here in Port Oakes, is recovering from injuries sustained in a battle. Right now he's weak as a kitten and working with a diminished staff. You're job is to catch him so that I can interrogate him. Find him, defeat his guards, and drag him out of the base. Once he's out, he won't be your concern. My people will handle it.

 

You're is incorrect, it should say Your.

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Vigilante>Villain tip to Sabotage the Promethean Android (Reams of Scientific Gibberish tip, 20-29 for Vigilantes on Redside), the captioned news report at the end of the mission reads:  

 

"We'll have more on this story as it developes. Back to you, Bob."

 

Should be "develops." Someone added an extra 'e.'

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Likely an oversight when Mental Manipulation had its powers shuffled in i27p1 and damage adjusted, Telekinetic Thrust mentions that the power does 'minimal damage' (with 'Damage: Minor' also being listed) despite dealing twice as much damage as Mind Probe (which is listed as Moderate).  This is visible on the character creation screen, not sure if the in-game description matches.

Currently playing on Indomitable as @Zork Nemesis; was a Protector native on live.

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Nature's Wrath Badge

 

'This hill rises like a blister above the canopy that spread like a green plaque to devour Woodvale.'

 

should be

 

'This hill rises like a blister above the canopy that spread like a green plague to devour Woodvale.'

 

Maybe this one was written by a dentist?

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Brickstown Prison Break, pop-up message regarding timing for next event:

 

'The Prisoners will breakout soon...'

 

should be

 

'The Prisoners will break out soon...'

 

[breakout is a noun; break out is the verb]

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Okay, not a typo but where else am I going to put it? From the Sgt Schorr arc. Surely something could be added here?

 

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One of these is right. I'd bet it's the actual name over the door.  Also, that one would be harder to change! From Investigator Whitworth in Praetoria.

 

 

 

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Darkest Before Dawn: Part Two (Arc id 30210) | Darkest Before Dawn: Part Three (Arc id 30560) |

 Bridge of Forever ( Arc id 36642)* | The Cassini Division (Arc id 37104)* | The House of Gaunt Saints (Arc id 37489)*The Spark of the Blind (Arc id 40403)* | Damnatio Memoriae (Arc id 41140)* The Eve of War (Arc id 41583)*

I Sing of Arms and the Man (Arc id 42617)* | Three Sisters (Arc id 43013)*

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