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Port Oakes, Powder Monkey Badge:

 

'The last of the pirates died at this location defending the fort against Blackbeard.'

 

Something's wrong here.  Blackbeard was a pirate.  I know pirates sometimes fought amongst themselves, but according to the Swashbuckler plaque nearby: 'Blackbeard himself captured this fort in 1718. He tortured and killed the ill-prepared French soldiers manning it, leaving behind legends of ghostly hauntings that still persist to this day.'

 

So I think this is meant to be 'The last of the French soldiers died at this location defending the fort against Blackbeard.'

 

Of course, this opens a related can of worms: the ghosts are clearly pirates and not French soldiers, so there's a more complex problem going on here.

 

 

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From "Defeat Archon Morena and his guards" (as given by John Strobel):

 

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[NPC] Archon Archon Morena: I want all systems checked again. I think our network has been compromised.
[NPC] Archon Archon Morena: They must not be allowed to escape.

 

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 You recovered the data and defeated Archon Archon Morena.

 

Apparently Morena has gone above and beyond the call of duty to fascism to earn not one, but TWO Archon titles.

 

Meanwhile, Max doesn't even have one.

 

Just after, John gave me the mission "Defeat Archon Ippolita & his guards" and started making demands on how I finish the mission. What really worries me is that HE'S double promoting Archons as well. Really, John?!

 

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The man who organized the Council strike is Archon Archon Ippolita. I want him in custody before the day is out.


 

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[NPC] Archon Archon Ippolita: One demonstration is all that will be required. They will acquiesce once this sorry building is no more.
[NPC] Archon Archon Ippolita: You fools cannot stop the Council's brilliant scheme.

You have defeated Archon Archon Ippolita
You gain 1,440 influence.

 

 

Either John has an inside track to the Council's promotion regime, or he's the ONE HANDING OUT PROMOTIONS. ISN'T THAT RIGHT, ARCHON ARCHON STROBEL!?

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Diviner Maros, Force information on Calystix from the Legacy Chain, clue from researcher:

 

'The last known occurrence of the Cult was in a small Massachusetts fishing village in the 1920s, though it's unknown if it was lead by a priest called Calystix, as the cult was destroyed by the American Navy for crimes of piracy and cannibalism.'

 

should be

 

'The last known occurrence of the Cult was in a small Massachusetts fishing village in the 1920s, though it's unknown if it was led by a priest called Calystix, as the cult was destroyed by the American Navy for crimes of piracy and cannibalism.'

 

 

Diviner Maros, Find the location of Calystix, mish briefing:

 

'All that could lead to the second singularity collapses in on itself.'

 

should be

 

'All that could lead to the second singularity collapsing in on itself.'

 

 

Funny how it takes multiple playthroughs to notice some of these.

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A vigilante to villain tip mission exit popup seems to have the wrong text. I'm not quite sure what it should say, but probably the real mission title, whatever that was. Here's a screenshot, and in case that gets lost somehow, it's for "Vigilante To Villain SL6-7 Five" which also appears in the title of the popup. 

 

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Another Vigilante-To-Villain tip mission, has Sidewinder mentioned as male but presenting as female. The name of the mission is "An Unreturned Phone Call".

 

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Mission:Tip - Mask Covered In Saliva, mish briefing:

 

'Going in there and saving the patrons and manager of the casino would earn you their gratitude - but more so, you would have free reign over taking the money from the casino for yourself. 

Then again...those Carnies are still probably fighting the Arachnoids in that lair. But if someone were to go in there and finish them off...well, that would be less Carnies around to keep their leader, Vanessa DeVore, powered.'
 

should be

 

'Going in there and saving the patrons and manager of the casino would earn you their gratitude - but more so, you would have free rein over taking the money from the casino for yourself. 

Then again...those Carnies are still probably fighting the Arachnoids in that lair. But if someone were to go in there and finish them off...well, that would be fewer Carnies around to keep their leader, Vanessa DeVore, powered.'

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5 hours ago, Cinnder said:

Then again...those Carnies are still probably fighting the Arachnoids in that lair. But if someone were to go in there and finish them off...well, that would be less Carnies around to keep their leader, Vanessa DeVore, powered.'

Not a typo; the briefing NPC simply doesn't know or care about the distinction, as many people do not.

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Newspaper mission, The Bank Gun, glowie clue:

 

'An interesting idea, but it looks like the gun isn't currently functioning. Ah well, it'll still be worth something to the right problems.'

 

Not sure what they are trying to say here, but as it stands it doesn't make sense.

 

Maybe they meant 'it'll still be worth something to the right buyers'?

 

If we want to retain the word 'problems', it could be 'it'll still be worth something in solving certain problems' or 'it'll still be useful when applied to the right problems.'

 

Either way, it's not useful to a problem.

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Arc: World Wide Red

Mission; Check with Firenze about any strange operations his people have seen in China

Clue Text: "...a covert coup de tat..." should be, "...a covert coup d'état...".

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Magus Mu'Drakhan, Recover the missing mystic and discover the reason for his abduction, mish briefing:

 

'Thus, I must work through an emissary, and I would chose you for this task.'

 

should be

 

'Thus, I must work through an emissary, and I would choose you for this task.'

 

 

Mish map entrance pop-up:

 

'This place seems unusually decayed.  Almost as if there was a supernatural force at work, driving it to dissolution.'

 

should be 

 

'This place seems unusually decayed.  Almost as if there were a supernatural force at work, driving it to dissolution.'

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Magus Mu'Drakhan, Recover Ancient Mu Soul Crystal, debriefing:

 

'Should the Circle succeed, you will perish as we will, however, since our researches in the Blood Tome has revealed that there are approximately one billion people on Earth...'

 

should be

 

'Should the Circle succeed, you will perish as we will; however, since our researches in the Blood Tome has revealed that there are approximately one billion people on Earth...'

 

(Comma after 'will' should be a semicolon)

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6 hours ago, Cinnder said:

'Should the Circle succeed, you will perish as we will; however, since our researches in the Blood Tome has revealed that there are approximately one billion people on Earth...'

And, in a grammar fault, 'has' should be 'have' -- "... our researches ... have revealed..."

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And now that srmalloy has put the spotlight on that type of error, it helped me catch this one...

 

Technician Naylor, Steal Coordinates, Nemesis Explorer Report clue:

 

'These reports from the Nemesis Army Exploration corps cites dozens of different parallel dimensions'

 

should be

 

'These reports from the Nemesis Army Exploration corps cite dozens of different parallel dimensions'

 

...since 'reports' is plural.

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Technician Naylor, Secure Longbow base in an alternate dimension, briefing:

 

'We've got the portal all set up. Once your through, you'll probably be comin' right into a whole pack a' good guys, so be ready.'

 

should be

 

'We've got the portal all set up. Once you're through, you'll probably be comin' right into a whole pack a' good guys, so be ready.'

 

I don't think this one can be explained away by Naylor's atrocious Dick van Dyke faux-Cockney. 😉 

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Mr G., Primal Earth arc, Attack Vanguard's Prison Base, Splice dialogue:

 

'I help orchestrate a mass slaughter with Clockwork and they label you a war criminal.'

 

should be either

 

'You help orchestrate a mass slaughter with Clockwork and they label you a war criminal.' [intentionally talking about herself in third person consistently]

 

or

 

'I help orchestrate a mass slaughter with Clockwork and they label me a war criminal.' 

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From 'The Freakshow War' arc given by Neal Kendrick


 

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The Freakshow War

It's a shame you weren't able to save that Schwartzwald fellow; it sounds like he was the Freakshow's primary target. At least you were able to recover his files. Most of these notes do seem to be about the Freakshow, though I'm afraid they'd only make sense to Schwartzwald himself. Maybe he got to close to something. There are several references to meetings with a man named Joe Baker; maybe he can tell us more about the Freakshow's attack.

 

to/too confusion:

'to close to something' should be 'too close to something'.

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On 3/30/2020 at 5:10 AM, RikOz said:

Redside, Mr. G stuff. The second "Yin's", last word of the second paragraph, should just be the plural "Yins" I saw the same mistake earlier in this arc, perhaps earlier in the first part of this same mission, but I didn't get a screenshot.

 

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I may have found the other one that you mention...

 

Mr G, Finale: The Final Headline, mish briefing:

 

'Without the Family, the Yin's have nothing left to throw at you.'

 

should be

 

'Without the Family, the Yins have nothing left to throw at you.'

 

 

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And one more....

 

Mr G., Part One: Hostages, Splice dialogue:

 

'Also, there should be two crates with some of the tech that the Yin's are using inside.'

 

should be

 

'Also, there should be two crates with some of the tech that the Yins are using inside.'

 

 

and on the same mission, the text when you search a crate:

 

'You found some of the Yin's technology!'

 

should be

 

'You found some of the Yins' technology!'

 

Possessive in this case is correct, but it should be the plural possessive.

 

 

Mr G., Part Two: Old Projects, mish briefing:

 

'After that, the Awakened will turn and destroy the Yin's and their reputation here.'

 

should be

 

'After that, the Awakened will turn and destroy the Yins and their reputation here.'

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Basse Croupier, Remind Archon Dekker to pay up, clue - bill with note from Johnny Sonata:

 

'Don't be a cheapskate, Dekker. Nobody likes it, and I guarantee that they'll be worse to come'

 

I'm pretty sure was meant to be

 

'Don't be a cheapskate, Dekker. Nobody likes it, and I guarantee that there'll be worse to come'

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Basse Croupier, Recover Ms. Vashers and show her son the error of his ways, mish entry pop-up:

 

'Ms. Vashers is in here somewhere. You just have to hope that it's getting her out is worth the money.'

 

should be 

 

'Ms. Vashers is in here somewhere. You just have to hope that getting her out is worth the money.'

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On the level up power selection screen (and the power info by right clicking), Speed Boost for Kinetics states that you can boost a single targeted ally.  Speed Boost was changed long ago to affect multiple nearby allies at once.  Similarly, Increase Density reads as if it only targets one ally but isn't as straight forward about it.  Increase Density also mentions slowing the ally down, which that component of the power no longer exists,

 

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