The Mighty Fighting Moe Gijinka Team Squad (new AE SFMA, looking for feedback)

[Electricboots]

AE arc #68409.

 

This is the origin story of a "solo supergroup" I've created. Originally I only wanted to make 1-2 silly characters, but it snowballed and now it's an SG with 52 characters in it... lol...

 

I published the arc at 4am this morning but hopefully I wasn't too sleepy to include big problems in it. 🙂

 

Thank you very much for your time If you take a look at it!

[Forager]

L3m0nh3ad was an awesome original design for a Freak Boss! Those are hard to do with the costume creator options. The team is also kind of a brilliant group to make NPCs out of, because I instantly know who they are by their name and look.

 

I think you might have a mislabeled nav text or something in the last mission. I had two "Look for shady files..." type objectives, but then one went away I think upon rescuing someone. It got pretty wild at the end so I'm not sure what it was that made one of them go away, but it wasn't a glowie.

[Electricboots]

1 hour ago, Forager said:

L3m0nh3ad was an awesome original design for a Freak Boss! Those are hard to do with the costume creator options. The team is also kind of a brilliant group to make NPCs out of, because I instantly know who they are by their name and look.

 

I think you might have a mislabeled nav text or something in the last mission. I had two "Look for shady files..." type objectives, but then one went away I think upon rescuing someone. It got pretty wild at the end so I'm not sure what it was that made one of them go away, but it wasn't a glowie.

 

Thank you very much for the feedback, I will take a look at that last mission!