Hello! Testing this out with a L20 rad/atomic blaster, just to see if it is possible.
One thing I do for reals is proofread. Here are two typos found thus far:
In Watkins text that starts with "Yes, despite everything I've seen", the word 'cellular' is spelled 'celluar'.
In 'Hunt Down the Cannibal Corpses', a freak says "I told you we should have been more discrete." Guessing he meant the other meaning and spelling, 'discreet'.
Random thoughts:
I liked 'Dubstitch'
I hit 'leave' before I accepted mission 1 from Watkins, wondering if it would kick me back out to the text so I could read one part again, but when I came back to him, I had the mission The Graveyard Shift as if I had completed his conversations. Intentional?
In the first mission after beating up 20 freaks in Talos, I saw the cadavers dancing with the Freaks and I think my jaw dropped. 'Clearly something is different' might have come out of my mouth. And then I got to enjoy my
First death of the arc! As the zoombies plowed into me before I could react. Might have still been in amazement mode after watching them dance.
I'll come back to this later when I have some more time, but those are my initial observations - except for, this was fun! And that's the point! Thank you kindly.
Focused Feedback: The Graveyard Shift (Hero Story Arc, Level 20-29)
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Hello! Testing this out with a L20 rad/atomic blaster, just to see if it is possible.
One thing I do for reals is proofread. Here are two typos found thus far:
Random thoughts:
I liked 'Dubstitch'
I hit 'leave' before I accepted mission 1 from Watkins, wondering if it would kick me back out to the text so I could read one part again, but when I came back to him, I had the mission The Graveyard Shift as if I had completed his conversations. Intentional?
In the first mission after beating up 20 freaks in Talos, I saw the cadavers dancing with the Freaks and I think my jaw dropped. 'Clearly something is different' might have come out of my mouth. And then I got to enjoy my
First death of the arc! As the zoombies plowed into me before I could react. Might have still been in amazement mode after watching them dance.
I'll come back to this later when I have some more time, but those are my initial observations - except for, this was fun! And that's the point! Thank you kindly.