Hoboken Hobo

Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate that you took the time go go through it, I've saved your notes in a Google Doc so I can call back to them later. To answer a few of your questions: I kept it to one mission because I have a bad habit of quitting something mid-production if I have t0o many cogs in the machine and it's stopped me from making literally anything in the creative gaming space, so it was a self imposed hard limit to make sure I actually got something out there for once. As for why the Hobokenverse, I didn't know how else to separate that 99% of what I had planned has nothing to do with the main game lore, and the Outcasts were what my sleep deprived brain came up with to keep my custom charas to a bare minimum starting off. Lazy? Yes, but at the time I couldn't come up with something better. Once again, thank you for the input, I'll take it to heart!

The local Police Captain has been handed down orders from on high to clear a warehouse out. His hands are tied and resources are stretched out too thin to get it done, thus he's put a call out for heroes to help. That's where you come in... Details: Levels 5- 20 Solo Friendly Custom Characters Non-Canon Story Been wanting to make one of these forever, even when I played way back in the day. A buddy got on my case to get this done and so here we are. This is very much a first attempt, but I would still enjoy input. Thank you in advanced for your help and hope you have fun!