Heart of Words Part One and Two

[LordRassilon]

I'm looking for Feedback for my first two arcs, which are now completed.  I really want to thank Darmian, Akylosaur, Cranebump and my friends in Twitch for playtesting Part 2.  Part 2 was a struggle to make work, but with all their feedback I think it plays much better now.  There were major changes to just about every mission.  I really hope people enjoy these first two parts.  I am now planning and writing the finale.  I am definitely shooting for the moon in the final part--should make for proper drama if I pull it off.

Any and all feedback is much appreciated!

Cheers,

@valeyard

Arc ID 25906  --  Heart of Words Part One
Arc ID 54637  --  Heart of Words Part Two