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From Mako: "It was only through the intervention of .. that saved the Mu" is not a good sentence. One way to fix it would be change the ending into "that the Mu were saved".
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In a clue from Mako's second mission, it says: "undercover" in the last sentence should be "uncover".
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More Grillo, two right after each other: This should not start with a quote. "these new breed of Snakes" should be "this new breed of Snakes".
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From Operative Grillo: in "the secrets these scientists have is rightfully ours", "is" should be "are".
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Efficiency Expert Pither has so far done this twice: in the mission summary, it says: 2 Defeat heroes (in the other case commanders) should be 2 heroes/commanders to defeat. Another one:
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In Shadow Spider's Crimson Hunt mission, it says: The first "contact" should be "contract", as it is written the second time.
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More telempathic amplifier, so that's probably intentional. But also "you once you have the sample you" should not have that "you" at the start.
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"telempathic" should be "telepathic" Or maybe not? The word is repeated several times in the clue, so it seems intentional.
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The clues you find in "Seek clues to Circle plans" from Mage-Killer Zuhkara are: The last one shouldn't start with quotes.
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Not really a typo I suppose, but it seems close enough. Arbiter Daos says after completing the first mission: At this point, you can call him. Then after the second mission he says: The comment about the private communication codes should be in the first message (or calling him should only be possible after the second). (These screenshots were taken through Ouroboros; normally Absolute Vengeance is not the first mission chain he gives.)
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Not sure what was intended, but "It's subtly astounds even me" is incorrect. Perhaps it should simply be "It astounds even me"?
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Both clues in "Defeat Aurora & get books" start similarly: In both clues, "These passage is" should be either "This passage is" or "These passages are".
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Magus Mu'Drakhan says: "a recent trend" and "something new" seem to be the same thing, while they are presented as opposites.
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A clue in Hardcase's mission "Collect demonic essence" is: In the last sentence, "it's" should be "its".