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good job ! shadow make the light. If i could suggest, you put a light on right so put shadow on her left side face's to.

and be careful of thickness of her boots  that the same of her pink robe.

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the tone used in the story is second degree, the cops seems not so smart and more they arrest a hero believing to have a criminal. weapons trafficking sounds good to me.

 

my little stories i'm doing take some situation in CoH to replace it with some humour or ridiculous situation.

I would also point out that René is primarily a male name in French (if I am wrong about that

please do let me know) but is typically a female name in English since both the cops appear to be male.

I don't understand ur point of view in ur phrase above :  do you mean i must change name for policeman in translate version because he 's male ?

- René name's could be used for male of female in French and i know some male personnality name René in English

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Hello,

an adventure of Vigilance and a confiscate weapons mission.

let the police do their job

thank you

 

first square :

- It was the last weapons to confiscate, i will go back to see my contact for a debriefing.

Third square :

- Hey not so fast, we need to check all bags !

- yep

Fourth Square :

- Gun's dealing ! you are good for the Zig. Don't try to fool us, René it's smell good promotion !

- yep

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Hello Christopher,

thank you for translate job, your personal version is better than google and i think it will for a long time yet. 

I tried with Firefox or Safari and the picture  works, but some things i tried for waterfox doesn't work so maybe is Waterfox the problem ?
 

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hello, the first adventure of Vigilance a hero from french community call "vigilance"