All That Glitters Series - Vigilante - [1 - 54]

[Police Woman]

I had a fun time playing All That Glitters 1.1: Missing in Mercy (arc id 34842). 

 

 

I thought it was a great intro villain arc, and I really liked how the dispossessed Praetorians were used, along with the many canon red-side contacts that you got to interact with. The way the various NPCs were chained together to "introduce" you to the next NPC was nicely done.

 

 

I did think the arc ended in a weird place, and I would've liked a more climactic final mission.

 

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The last mission was just clicking 3 glowies on a map with no enemies (until after the mission is completed, when an ambush spawns), which seemed rather anticlimactic.  Also we never actually found Dr. Cohen, who we've been chasing for most of the story arc, so it feels like we weren't able to complete the story.  We did get to rescue Burke and Desslock which was nice.  I understand the story continues in All That Glitters 1.2, 1.3 etc., but I would've liked to end the arc with the player achieving some sort of success.  Maybe consider ending the arc right after freeing Desslock and Beholder and defeating the infamous Olivia Darque?  That felt like a good "finale" mission.

 

Also, found some typos, in case you want to make updates:

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"Yeah, Thanks!" should probably be "Yeah, thanks!"

 

"Antimatter's right hand" should be "Anti-matter's right-hand man"

 

"part or Recluse's" should be "part of Recluse's"

 

"purfication" should be "purification"

 

"The Infected" should probably be "the Infected"

 

"Creed meantioned" should be "Creed mentioned"

 

"can findi a benefactor" should be "can find a benefactor"

 

"scientiic pursuits" should be "scientific pursuits"

 

No comma between "Mongoose" and "wends his truck".

 

"Marshall Brass" should be "Marshal Brass".

 

"Olvia Darque" should be "Olivia Darque"

 

"Diagonostic Computer" should be "Diagnostic Computer"

 

 

Edited Sunday at 03:46 AM by Police Woman

[sponazgul]

Just wanted to say how helpful it is to have someone finding typos and presenting them in such a clean fashion for the author to easily find and correct.

[TerroirNoir3]

32 minutes ago, sponazgul said:

Just wanted to say how helpful it is to have someone finding typos and presenting them in such a clean fashion for the author to easily find and correct.

Yeah, you're mostly not getting that from me!  LOL.

[sponazgul]

4 minutes ago, TerroirNoir3 said:

Yeah, you're mostly not getting that from me!  LOL.

Shame! Shame! 

 

LOL, you make it up by writing these incredible narratives from your character's perspective. You are above reproach.