Justaris Posted August 14, 2019 Share Posted August 14, 2019 (edited) I've dabbled some with the AE both on live and now on Homecoming, but I still feel my implementation is a bit rough. Appreciate any constructive feedback to help me improve. This arc is meant in part as a further exploration of the Tin Mage mythos as I always felt it was an underused part of the game's canon. I also have several Tin Mage themed characters myself (primarily on Torchbearer) so this also serves as a showcase for them. Edited August 14, 2019 by Justaris Clarification There can be no defense like elaborate courtesy - E.V. LucasMy AE arcs: Ex Machina, the story of the Tin Mage Corps. Arc ID #11781 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyksie Posted August 18, 2019 Share Posted August 18, 2019 I ran though it just now, and it was pretty good. Lots of detail, and the use of multiple colors and typefaces works well. I did find it to be a bit disjointed... we weren't told who the mysterious force that stopped time is, or exactly why Malta was attacking. The only serious problem was on mission 2, where I couldn't find one of the glowies. After cleaning out the courtyard, I finally found if after flying up to the top of the tower. A lot of people will not think to look there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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