Seeking Feedback: Arc ID #11781 "Ex Machina: The Rise of the Tin Mage Corps"

[Justaris]

I've dabbled some with the AE both on live and now on Homecoming, but I still feel my implementation is a bit rough.  Appreciate any constructive feedback to help me improve.

 

This arc is meant in part as a further exploration of the Tin Mage mythos as I always felt it was an underused part of the game's canon.  I also have several Tin Mage themed characters myself (primarily on Torchbearer) so this also serves as a showcase for them.

 

Edited August 14, 2019 by Justaris
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[Kyksie]

I ran though it just now, and it was pretty good. Lots of detail, and the use of multiple colors and typefaces works well. I did find it to be a bit disjointed... we weren't told who the mysterious force that stopped time is, or exactly why Malta was attacking.

 

The only serious problem was on mission 2, where I couldn't find one of the glowies. After cleaning out the courtyard, I finally found if after flying up to the top of the tower. A lot of people will not think to look there.