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Trike last won the day on December 12 2024

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  1. OMG. Perfect. chef’s kiss
  2. Man, I really need to replace my cooked video card. Haven’t played for nearly 4 months. Videos like this remind me what I’ve been missing.
  3. Mary Robinette Kowal advises writers to ask the question “Did they achieve their goal?” To maintain momentum, throw roadblocks in the way by answering either “Yes, but…” or “No, and…” and go from there.
  4. Monkey Fight Club in Pocket D! Furious George v. Banana Bandito Thing Kong v. Nigel
  5. Trying to figure out what the sign behind her says. Polar ice? Poultice? Pollllice?
  6. Were these done in Bing?
  7. Crimson Crossbow Jade Gentleman versus The Shadow Sorcerer (1951) Silvershot Sable Samurai
  8. Catamount (US) Wolfsong (Canada) Jungle Jaguar (Brazil) Panja (India) Panthera (Argentina)
  9. Blackfella (Australia) Green Teen (Nigeria) Eyebeam (US) Hardtek (UK)
  10. Bird-themed hero over the city. (I don’t have a good name yet.) I was trying to get it to make my toon Universelle. Prompt: rough oil painting, small in the distance a black and white costume female cosmic superhero flies over a city silhouetted by the moon
  11. The axe buried in the floor is pretty badass.
  12. As a former proofreader and editor, I would offer the critique that you should maintain a consistent tense. You’ve mixed past and present tense frequently, sometimes within the same sentence. For me, and this is more a personal preference, I think more naturalistic dialogue would suit the characters better rather than the stilted melodramatic dialogue you’ve employed. But that’s a choice I’d make. The past/present tense thing, though, that impedes ease of reading.
  13. He pees over who now?
  14. That face is next level. Bravo!
  15. Took me three tries to read “Nearsighted Man.” 😂 Which program did you use for these?
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