StorytellingMonkey

Ya think? /e faceplam What's a time waster? Is a time waster the kind of thing that @huang3721 want to make the Night of the Vampires not "quite plan"? As many posts I see for farms and level 50's running the same-old Council scanner missions, one would figure they would like a chance of pace now and again that didn't have an overly complicated story, allowed some challenges if they wanted them, and allowed a team that found that they were over their head the chance to complete the arc by avoiding the most dangerous challenges. I don't know. Each person judges based on their own opinions. I've seen plenty of DEV's Choice missions that honestly had to say how could that possibly rate being given a DEV's Choice? I could just try to get plays by recruiting for my arcs. No one but me would see most of the dialog. Check your souvenirs.

Even worse to get jumped on by people in the forums because the expect War and Peace instead of comic book story. I was just quickly writing so people might have some different to play. Obviously, I didn't take time to spell check this one and just hacked it out. I'll go back and do some spell checking as time provides. So did you bother playing my arc? Easter egg. There is a good bit of conversation and, yes, you can miss the boss/EB/AV conversations if you don't fight them. The Contact is clear. You must defeat ALL the vampires to stop the spread of vampires in Paragon City. They even question you about it at the end of the arc. Or it makes it challenging. A lot of this is a matter of perspective.

Thanks for checking it out. It looks like you enjoyed it. Reply to the critique No real detail about what makes the writing lacking. I think everyone know what an interaction bar is and taking time to write "... searching ..." or "...you inspect the blank..." is not necessary. Sometimes I do it, sometimes I don't. Some want a bunch of writing in the interaction boxes. Some complain that the information should be short. It's a matter of opinion. The AE doesn't come with a spell checker. I'm not paid to write AE stories. Sometimes I will dump the text into google and spell check, sometimes I don't. It's time consuming. If I'm going to take extra time to polish a story to "publishing" level, then I should just write it for publication in the real world and not waste time on trying to provide some fun alternative gaming that isn't already in City of Heroes. It is supposed to be hard to stop them from escaping. That's the whole point. The contact dialog even explains that. Critique of the the critique What I'm missing is: Did you play it solo or with a team? What level was the character/team? What character archetype(s) were on the team?

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