webcomic Fragmentary Veritas - City of Heroes Webcomic

[Cobalt Arachne]

12 minutes ago, Christopher Robin said:

The battle intensifies.

Drawing action scenes is definitely not something I have ton of experience in and the prospect has been daunting; But can't have a CoH comic without good battles xD

[Christopher Robin]

 

Well I am busy with the contest (sig) right now but do you

want any constructive critique when I get some time?

If not no worries, some want it and others don't.

 

I don't really have a whole lot of experience

drawing battles but I do read a lot of webcomics.

 

Edited March 12, 2021 by Christopher Robin

[Cobalt Arachne]

On 3/12/2021 at 2:47 PM, Christopher Robin said:

want any constructive critique when I get some time?

Sure! I'd definitely be open to feedback regarding the comic's layout, flow, and readability. If something is hard to follow, or the pacing feels off, I'd love to know (I'm aware the comic's pacing up until this current scene has been a bit quick). Or things like how I've tailored the extra content like the character/location profiles.

As far as my comic art's quality goes, I'm mostly proceeding with a "It will improve with time / is good enough as long as the reader can follow what is happening" approach, since the amount of time I can dedicate to the comic project isn't very flexible/set hours per week.

[Cobalt Arachne]

 Fragmentary Veritas - New Release: Chapter 2, Page 15 - 'Freebie':
http://fragmentaryveritas.webcomic.ws/comics/30

[Cobalt Arachne]

 Fragmentary Veritas - New Release: Chapter 2, Page 16 - 'Handy Solutions':
http://fragmentaryveritas.webcomic.ws/comics/31

[Cobalt Arachne]

 Fragmentary Veritas - New Release: Chapter 2, Page 17 - 'Finally Seeing Eye To Eye':
http://fragmentaryveritas.webcomic.ws/comics/32

Can't commit to any kind of release schedule, but still enjoy finding time to work on art when I can. 🙂