cranebump Posted September 6 Share Posted September 6 Thirty Thousand Seconds [ID: 64072] L44-50 Trapped in a psychic cage by a powerful villain, you assume the identity of the legendary Aristotle Frost, navigating your way through the last hours leading to his tragic fall. No notes or spoilers or anything for this one. Not the usual noir, or intricate semi-real world intrigue. But (perhaps) a veil of tears -- in 4 parts.:-) It's intended to be soloed. Hope you like it. (and, uh...lemme know what typos I have THIS time).:-) Thanks for the support, Crane 1 I have done a TON of AE work, both long form and single arc. Just search the AE mish list for my sig @cranebump. For more information on my stories, head to the AE forum sub-heading and look for “Crane’s World.” Support your AE authors! We ARE the new content. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clave Dark 5 Posted September 8 Share Posted September 8 Damn, and here I am sweating away on like my... seventh? 1 Tim "Black Scorpion" Sweeney: Matt (Posi) used to say that players would find the shortest path to the rewards even if it was a completely terrible play experience that would push them away from the game... ╔═══════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════╗ Clave's Sure-Fire Secrets to Enjoying City Of Heroes Ignore those farming chores, skip your market homework, play any power sets that you want, and ignore anyone who says otherwise. This game isn't hard work, it's easy! Go have fun! ╚═══════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════╝ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VeiledOwl Posted September 9 Share Posted September 9 It was well written, and I enjoyed it. I wasn't scanning for typos, so I only noticed one error: in the second mission, you appear to have accidentally used the $name function on the Knives of Artemis boss's dialog at the end. At least I assume it was a mistake; due to the nature of the arc, all other dialog is addressed to Frost. Specifically: 'Agent Branch: [Player name]! How did YOU get in here?' The only problem I had gameplay-wise was in the final mission, when Archon Mesmer's minion spawned 90 feet away from him. He was out of sight and in the middle of another mob, so it took a while to hunt him down to complete the mission. Probably just bad luck with spawn locations (not much you can do about that on open maps), but changing Mesmer's completion to 'boss only' might circumvent the issue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cranebump Posted September 9 Author Share Posted September 9 Shoot. I thought Mesmer was boss only. Definitely need to fix that. I'll check the $name function. I did notice that, but thought maybe it was just a glitch. I'll put it on the list to fix.. Thanks much! I have done a TON of AE work, both long form and single arc. Just search the AE mish list for my sig @cranebump. For more information on my stories, head to the AE forum sub-heading and look for “Crane’s World.” Support your AE authors! We ARE the new content. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cranebump Posted September 9 Author Share Posted September 9 On 9/8/2024 at 10:32 AM, Clave Dark 5 said: Damn, and here I am sweating away on like my... seventh? My stuff is much simpler than what you do, my friend.:-) 1 I have done a TON of AE work, both long form and single arc. Just search the AE mish list for my sig @cranebump. For more information on my stories, head to the AE forum sub-heading and look for “Crane’s World.” Support your AE authors! We ARE the new content. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cranebump Posted September 13 Author Share Posted September 13 Changed Mesmer to Boss Only. Removed $name tag from Knives boss. I have done a TON of AE work, both long form and single arc. Just search the AE mish list for my sig @cranebump. For more information on my stories, head to the AE forum sub-heading and look for “Crane’s World.” Support your AE authors! We ARE the new content. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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