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@cranebump & @Zhym... Thank both of you SO much for all the detailed feedback and support. I will definitely be retooling and revisiting the areas you detailed. Part of my problem I think, is I wrote all this in basically one take without stopping to consider other drafts. I got excited with a new toy, and took of full bore before I was in the saddle. I will tug on the reins before I hit publish and move on in the future. Also, for a first ever attempt, I think I should have stuck to making one really good mission and wrote other chapters AFTER great feedback such as this. I'll pay that mind in missions to come. Again...thank you both for the help. That was a lot of feedback made available for a newbie mission designer and that generosity is not lost on me. I'll make a comment here when changes are made.

Thank you very much for the advice, and for giving it a try soon. Paws

Hi Everyone, I've made my first set of AE missions. Its a story arc set in a sci fi/Horror setting. Its not terribly elaborate, and not intended for farming in the way most people think. It's a 4 part story arc that relies on story and atmosphere for enjoyment rather than xp or INF. I would really appreciate some folks checking it out and giving me some honest, BUT NOT MEAN, feedback. Please give ratings at the end of the mish, and feedback here if you like. Its called "The Grave and the Old". I hope you like it. ~Paws

Congratulations to all the finalists and winners. Also, gratz to the judges for the effort put into making this happen for us. Their hard work makes us all winners every day!

The screenshots posted give information important to understand the RP aspects/backstory of the base and its characters. Judges, please pay particular attention to the information given and keep it in mind when touring the base. Hint: Only two can keep a secret...

I am replying to this thread as an entry into the base building contest for 2023. SG Leader-Coinspinner. Global Handle of Owner-@blackpaws (@blackpaws/Coinspinner is the sole member of SG and only contributing builder) SG Name-The Trust Fund Shard-Everlasting SG Passcode-TRUST4810 Catagory-Multipurpose Base under 7K items. Names of Various SG Characters (5 x all owned by @blackpaws)-Coinspinner, Major Matt Mason, Wind Eagle, Blackpaws, Rook the Unforgiven Screenshots of Coinspinner + Personal Info: