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Design Notes:

  • Focuses on Tarixus, and unlockable content with a pair of missions. The undead archmage hovers near Potter's Field. He is an NPC in the Henri Dumont Arc. Guiding question was, What happened after things went south for Dumont?
  • Level range is 25-30, to mirror location (Shark).
  • Particularly interested in how this one works for teams. It solo'ed at about medium diff for my exemplared MA/SR scrapper. There are parts I definitely did not waltz through, though my namesake hero isn't all that powerful (he mainly exists to I could slap the gold Storyteller title on him.:-)
  • Some gnarly customs. Be Wary. And strongly suggest you have insps/temp powers/maybe some allies/pets for the finale.
  • Trivia: References to Shakespeare (mish titles); the musical group The Godfathers (Birth, School, Work, Death). Incidental callback to Mobius's Autumn Wards (incl. cameos). 

 

Other stuff:

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Thought I'd give a nod to some folks around here. Won't spoil them all, but here is one:

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You a wandering Merc, @Zhym. But at least you're an NCO.:-) 

 

The rest you'll have to see (looking at you, @Darmian, @TerroirNoir🙂

 

 

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I finally got a chance to play through this.  It's very good, @cranebump.  Well done.   And no timed missions! :classic_biggrin:

 

A few minor notes:
 

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  • In Mission 2, why was the FinCo Scientist following me?  I thought at first I was supposed to lead him to something, but he didn't have any role in the rest of the mission as far as I could tell.  At least it didn't turn into an escort mission. :)
  • In Mission 4, Properia ran off toward the exit, then stopped part way.  If I caught back up to her, she'd start running off again, then stop when I was out of her perception radius.  Is this just an artifact of trying to do a "rescued NPC runs for the exit" mechanic in AE?
  • There's a typo in the intro to the Finale: "We'll sell it to Cage, Everybody profits."  That should be a period after "Cage," right?

 

I'm really looking forward to seeing @TerroirNoir2's play-through. ;)

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1 minute ago, Zhym said:

I finally got a chance to play through this.  It's very good, @Darmian.  Well done.   And no timed missions! :classic_biggrin:

 

A few minor notes:
 

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  • In Mission 2, why was the FinCo Scientist following me?  I thought at first I was supposed to lead him to something, but he didn't have any role in the rest of the mission as far as I could tell.  At least it didn't turn into an escort mission. 🙂
  • In Mission 4, Properia ran off toward the exit, then stopped part way.  If I caught back up to her, she'd start running off again, then stop when I was out of her perception radius.  Is this just an artifact of trying to do a "rescued NPC runs for the exit" mechanic in AE?
  • There's a typo in the intro to the Finale: "We'll sell it to Cage, Everybody profits."  That should be a period after "Cage," right?

 

I'm really looking forward to seeing @TerroirNoir2's play-through. 😉

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1 hour ago, Zhym said:

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  • In Mission 2, why was the FinCo Scientist following me?  I thought at first I was supposed to lead him to something, but he didn't have any role in the rest of the mission as far as I could tell.  At least it didn't turn into an escort mission. 🙂
    • He is set to "Do Nothing," so him following you is a bug. He never followed me in any of the versions I ran.
  • In Mission 4, Properia ran off toward the exit, then stopped part way.  If I caught back up to her, she'd start running off again, then stop when I was out of her perception radius.  Is this just an artifact of trying to do a "rescued NPC runs for the exit" mechanic in AE?
    • Yeah, it's a bug. You can set them to "run to nearest door," but it doesn't mean they'll do it.
  • There's a typo in the intro to the Finale: "We'll sell it to Cage, Everybody profits."  That should be a period after "Cage," right?
    • Yep. I'll need to fix that. Thanks!

I'm really looking forward to seeing @TerroirNoir2's play-through. 😉

Thanks for the run. I'm lf to it too!

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1 hour ago, Zhym said:

Grah!  Fixed.

 

And here I was about to say how the arc had that customary Darmian tie-in to the lore... :classic_blush:

I think it'd need to be 4 fathoms deep for me to reach @Darmian status.:-)

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