Forager

You should read the post.

Yes. It's a trap. People who change knockback to knockdown are the same people who tell their kids not to go up the slide. It's a game. Play inspired!

There is no risk. It's not trademark infrringement or a violation of any intellectual property law. It's not a violation of the code of conduct.

You can say Toyota in a work of fiction. That's not trademark infringement. The line is way better with a brand name imo. Intellectual property rights are one of the most misunderstood topics on the internet, so don't take my word for it. This is one that can be sorted out pretty easily with a search.

About touring bases on other servers: Peacebringers start with flight.

Your character name: Forager Your Global handle: @Forager Are you the owner: Yes Are you the builder: Yes Your base’s name: The Apparatus The shard it is located on: Excelsior The passcode for entry: FORAGER-18887 The category your base is entering under: Realism Contributing builders’ names or Global handles: Just me. Any additional information you wish the judges to know beforehand: Visscale 5. The door at the end of the long hall will take you outside. That is the only hidden thing you need to view the base. Travel points are hidden in the vehicles inside as the base was also meant to be functional. There is a hidden area in the alley if you want to take a bit of a trip, but it's not technically part of the base. It's behind the barrel, next to the door marked "authorized personnel only." You will need fly there. There are several areas that are not for the public and are not accessible. Their presence is either for decoration or private use. The danger room, club preview, my office and the military base are not publicly accessible. Background Story:

How literally should I take the description for the Realism category? I was shooting for realistic in style, but it's still definitely a CoH base. Realism was the driving force behind most of the design, but there is an aspect of pillar on the back of a truck and a giant robot rat parked outside the nightclub... so it couldn't exist in the real world.

I'll tell ya what I'd do, man... two Talons at the same time, man.

This was a really good arc... maybe the best one I've played yet. I'm not into politics, but I understood all the references and found them hilarious. I'm blown away at how consistently you were able to adapt them to Paragon City... the awaken inspiration reference cracked me up. The fights on +1/x3 were a blast. I love ambushes. I usually stealth through AE arcs, but I did these as a KM and had a ton of fun. The missions were straightforward and made sense. I have no notes... bravo.

To be fair, Dual Origin enhancements are a waste.

*NOT alive

I just finished the first, and I would echo @Clave Dark 5's initial review. The world building was for the purpose of the story in a way that is rare for player content. I know that you were looking for otherworldly or exotic with the map choices, and I think you did a great job trying to make it feel that way. The writing was tight enough that I read every word. I especially appreciate that every mission didn't require a wall of text. It felt like the story was moving at a really pleasant pace. As for difficulty, I played it with a blaster on +1/x3 and found the fights fun enough. My favorite part was related to the way you incorporated emotions into the plot: As for criticism? I don't love when someone puts dialog in my character's mouth and I hate when I'm told when I think, feel or believe... but that's a personal pet peeve. Overall, very cool. It felt like you stayed "in the pocket" and craft a real mission arc that suits the game while using original characters with a unique feel. I don't know what exact vibe you were going for with them and I would prefer not to muse... but they felt like a group that doesn't exist in CoH but could. Most importantly? I had fun playing it.

That's probably why nobody has. (Mods: is this version ok? Or are we deleting every attempt to address the actual point of the thread?)

Lol ok I thought I was trippin...

Hate to be the guy who says discrimination doesn't exist because it's never happened to him... BUT... I play exclusively in PUGs on Excelsior. Some of you are claiming that this happens so frequently that I'm surprised I have never seen it.