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[Police Woman]

Arrow Girl's next adventure was [Ordinary People 2] Hope and Bullets (arc #31903) by @cranebump, the sequel to [Ordinary People 1] Standard Operating Procedure.

 

 

The Powers That Be are trying to take Detective Freitag off the Skullions case, and Freitag has gone off investigating on his own, with the help of a police cadet, and gotten into trouble.  Detective Becktrees calls me in to help.

 

I quickly locate and rescue Freitag.

 

 

Based on the dialog, Freitag wants to find Willie (the police cadet that he dragged into this), but ... I convince him not to?  This doesn't make sense to me, but I go ahead and lead him out, then find the police cadet on my own.  She wants to download some files from a nearby database, presumably filled with valuable evidence.

 

We get jumped by an ambush (actually, a boss spawns right next to me) and narrowly escape.

 

After rescuing Freitag and Willie, Becktrees puts me on a stakeout in a suspiciously quiet neighborhood of Kings Row.  I don't fully buy this ("nothing at all is happening in this neighborhood!  IT MUST BE A PLOT!!") but somehow this hunch pays off and Arrow Girl follows some trucks to a villain base operated by the "Gatling Gang", the actual name of the mysterious "Hats" faction that first appeared in Ordinary People 1. 

 

The Gatling base has some evil research scientists doing .... something nefarious.  I wasn't quite sure what (I don't think it's fully explained here, so I suspect it's a hook for the sequel), but they were determined to keep Arrow Girl from finding out.

 

 

Arrow Girl rescued and teamed up with an Arachnos operative (he apparently was also investigating the suspiciously quiet neighborhood) and beat up Steve Gatling, the local Gatling boss.

 

 

There was a pretty big ambush (or maybe 2 ambushes) that showed up soon after fighting Steve Gatling, and tbh the ambushers were meaner than the boss, though Arrow Girl narrowly defeated them.

 

An awkward moment.  They had a lot of knockback!

 

Having cleared the Gatling base, Becktrees and I were patting ourselves on the back when the Gatling Gang launched a firebomb attack and a physical invasion of the Paragon Police Department headquarters!  And Willie was in there, trying to decode the Important Files from before!  (Drama!)  Arrow Girl charged into the burning building to rescue Willie and stop the villains!

 

 

We're done when I say we're done, buddy!

 

After clearing out the Gatling Gang invaders, we found that Willie has been captured and taken to a construction site, where the Gatling Gang is massing in large numbers and apparently about to move somewhere.  Arrow Girl and some other backup Kings Row heroes are sent to the scene!

 

Steve Gatling, the boss from before, is back and suffers a beatdown from Arrow Girl and Acrobattle, one of the NPC allies (and reappearing from Ordinary People 1).

 

 

Defeating Steve caused his even meaner brother, Larry Gatling, to show up.  Arrow Girl and Acrobattle tried to take him down.

 

 

Larry Gatling spawned as an elite boss for me, and hit hard with excellent accuracy (able to hit Arrow Girl even through 2 lucks).  Arrow Girl was defeated twice fighting Larry until I decided I'd better round up all the other optional allies in the mission.

 

Oh... Whipsmart again.  Um, yes, we need you and your cannon fod-- your wonderful robots

 

With all this help, we're able to dogpile Larry and finish him off, though it was a close thing; we lost Acrobattle and Arrow Girl dropped to 20% health at one point.

 

 

After we defeat Larry he gives us an ominous clue:

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He claims not to have had anything to do with "what happened to the girl".  Sure enough, we find the dead body of poor Willie Sullivan, aspiring police cadet.

 

The arc ends on a bit of a downer, but in the final mission debriefing there is a surprisingly poignant bit of writing that eulogizes Willie.

 

 

Overall impressions

 

I liked Willie's arc.  The story did a good job of introducing her and making us care about what happens to her.  I think it'd be a little more powerful if Freitag helped the player find Willie in mission 1 (after all, he got her into this jam) and if Freitag were one of the optional allies in mission 4 (so he can react to finding Willie).

 

I found the game mechanics in mission 4 to be especially frustrating.  Despite Becktrees telling me that "We've got to save Willie" in the mission briefing, finding Willie doesn't even show up in my initial objectives for the mission; instead I have to "Arrest Steve Gatling (again)" (reasonable) and "5 getaway vehicles to destroy" (not important to the story, and also having 5 things to find on a huge outdoor map is kind of a pain).  The chained objectives of Defeat Steve -> Defeat Larry -> Find Willie were frustrating because they could spawn anywhere on the outdoor map, so I had to criss-cross the map repeatedly; I ended up literally clearing the entire map to finish this mission, which felt like too much. 

 

I think narratively it might be better if the chained objectives were reordered to either Find Willie -> Defeat Steve -> Defeat Larry, or Defeat Steve -> Find Willie -> Defeat Larry.  

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This order would let the player discover Willie's fate earlier, then take revenge on the final boss, which may feel more satisfying.  It mitigates the downer ending, though, which might or might not be the author's vision.

 

The custom characters were a little difficult for my squishy character, but not unacceptably so.  I started to dread the "Knife" minions, who could see me at long range and run through my glue patches to try and stab me.  There was a custom faction of entirely "Assistant" minions that staffed the ambushes in mission 2 and guarded vehicles in mission 4; since they all had dual pistols, their attacks repeatedly stacked knockback on my character, which was frustrating.  I'd suggest mixing in a couple minion types with varying attack types.  The final boss, Larry Gatling, was pretty hard for Arrow Girl, but several optional allies were provided and they were a big help.

 

Minor typos and continuity errors (not serious, but listing these in case you want to fix them):

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"abaondoned" should be "abandoned"

 

 

This clue is numbered "4.:" with both a period and a colon (all your other clues only have one or the other)

 

"they're training" should be "their training" (also occurs on other Gatling Gang members)

 

"harcopy" should be "hardcopy"

 

Also, the text in the Souvenir (Golden Bullet) appears to contradict clue #14 (Larry's Confession) - one says Larry did it, the other says he didn't do it.

 

I gave this story arc 4 stars.  Arrow Girl ended the arc 80% of the way through level 18 (...with some debt).

 

 

 

[cranebump]

Some really good ideas there. Mish 4 does need some work (starting with making getaway vehicles optional, since that’s easy). My recent issue with fixing any of my older stories was crashing during edits (due to file size, I guess). Putting willie rescue active upon M4 entry is a good idea,  though I’d have to tweak the confession and a couple other things. There IS a callback to Willies death in the capstone arc, so the downer ending is entirely intentional, and meant as motivation during the last arc of the story.
 

Really good feedback. I am not sure when I’ll get around to employing any of it, but I’ve put a pin in it for future reference. Thanks again!

Edited November 16 by cranebump

[TygerDarkstorm]

Can I just say how lovely it is to see the content creators come in here and take the feedback in the manner y'all have? It helps that Police Woman provides her criticism in a constructive manner as well, I'm sure, but it's so cool to see you creators take that criticism thoughtfully. Like sure, some of the choices you've made are things you stand by, which is fair as you know what you had intended for your content, but seeing how respectful your responses are make someone like me a lot less nervous to try my own version of one of the review type threads in the future.

 

I really love this idea and love following Arrow Girl's adventures through the AE.

[Police Woman]

The next arc in my search was tagged both "Ideal for Teams" and "Challenging" and intended for a Task Force-like experience, which didn't seem like a good idea for my solo blaster.

 

So Arrow Girl's next adventure was Dream Paper (arc# 6645) by @Zasani (fka Glazius), a heroic arc where you're sent to stop the Lost from breaking and entering an apartment complex.  I also played this arc on the live servers, but that was a long time ago so I remembered almost none of it.

 

 

Alfonse Rubel, a delivery boy from Steel Canyon, tells me about a gang of Lost breaking into his apartment building.  Entering the apartment complex, I rescue a number of tenants, including Grandma Yan.

 

Explosive arrows are not "best practices" for hostage situations, but it worked out

 

Curiously, the Lost seemed mainly interested in stealing packets of medicine from Grandma Yan.  Alfonse sent the "medicine" off to a PPD lab, and the analysis came back with a lead to a warehouse full of Tsoo.

 

 

The Tsoo were remarkably Zen about Arrow Girl breaking into their warehouse and demanding answers; it turns out the "medicine" wasn't anything illegal, just some herbal alternative medicine one of them had made for Granny Yan.

 

Going back to Alfonse, he tells me the PPD lab he sent the paper packets to was under attack!  Arrow Girl just cleared out another attack on the PPD in the last arc.  Why do villains keep attacking the poor police department?!  *shakes fist at sky*

 

 

 

In the police lab, Arrow Girl rescued a number of rather woozy and confused police and Longbow saying that they had gotten "exposed" to some substance.  Finally she tracked down a lab tech who actually knew what was going on.

 

 

It turns out it's the paper used to wrap the packets of medicine, not the contents at all!  There was something psychoactive about the paper that mesmerized all the police people who looked at it, and this had something to do with why the Lost wanted it so badly.  The "dream paper" was getting regularly dropped off by a Troll paperboy, so Arrow Girl went off to track this Troll down.

 

I eventually find him deep in a Troll cave.  He looks a bit sick, and his friends are not happy that I'm there.

 

 

Once I fight off the other Trolls, the paperboy tells me he's trying to get clean from Superadine (which is why he seems sick).  He's trying to go legit and was delivering the paper as a favor for a Mr. Blaloch, but he willingly tells me where he's picking up the dream paper - another warehouse, of course.

 

 

 

In the warehouse is a ton of paper-making paraphernalia which all needs to be destroyed, over the protests of the Lost that are operating the paper mill.  I run across the Troll paperboy again and he offers to help out; having a big muscly ally proves very useful for Arrow Girl.

 

 

The Lost keep babbling something about Scripture and the Prophet, and we finally stumble across the Prophet himself:

 

 

The Prophet / Mr. Blaloch seems a little mixed up, alternating between villain dialog and being a confused old man, the two personalities struggling for control.  Exposure to the dream paper and/or the Lost had given the Prophet psychic powers, but he's not too tough, and Arrow Girl and her troll sidekick manage to beat him.  Afterwards, Mr. Blaloch recovers from being possessed by the dream paper and seems to have no memory of what happened - though there are several loose ends that hint at future investigations.  (Though I don't believe a sequel was ever published.)

 

Overall I thought this arc had an offbeat plot but was well written and well balanced for a low level arc; mostly standard enemies with a few custom characters for bosses and hostages.  I liked the minor characters that were introduced: Grandma Yan, her Tsoo grandson, and the Troll paperboy.  I would've liked Blaloch to get a little more development before we meet him in the last mission, that would've made his possession (and eventual recovery) hit harder.  Alfonse does name drop Blaloch earlier on, but it wasn't enough to give me any kind of impression of the man.  The clues were well-written, especially the ones that told a personal story about one of the characters.  The idea of the dream paper itself was very creative, and it made total sense that we'd check into the drugs before suspecting something about the paper.

 

I gave this arc 5 stars.  Arrow Girl finished the arc 70% of the way through level 19.

 

 

 

 

[Police Woman]

Arrow Girl's next adventure was Bridge of Forever: (arc #36642), a level 19-20 Loyalist arc by @Darmian.  On this arc, Chimera sends you to investigate the disappearances of several members of Powers Division.

 

 

As it happens, Arrow Girl is a Praetorian character whose origin story involves working for Chimera, so .... of course I had to make a Chimera ninja themed costume for this arc.

 

On the first mission Arrow Girl teams up with Officer Welks of the PPD to investigate the disappearances.  The map starts entirely empty and we start off mostly clicking glowies to get clues, so there was very little fighting, but this actually conveyed the feeling of doing detective work very well.

 

 

After we found a lot of clues, there was an obligatory ambush, which we defeated handily.

 

After that, Chimera sent Arrow Girl to follow up leads by breaking into a variety of government buildings to steal evidence, generating friction with the other big-name Praetors.  This all felt very true to the Praetorian dimension.

 

 

 

At one point, while investigating the underground tunnels, I run into Mr. G, who claims to be there on Chimera's behalf to replace another ally who was a no-show.

 

Sure!  You look trustworthy!

 

Mr. G helps Arrow Girl with her mission, clearing out ghouls and other sewer trash ... at least for a little while.  When we're on the verge of rescuing one of the missing persons, Mr. G turns traitor.

 

I guess I should've expected this.  It's another day in Praetoria.

 

 

After escaping Mr. G's treachery, Chimera sends Arrow Girl to break into one of Mr. G's cloning facilities to find out what he's really up to.  And while there, Arrow Girl encounters... Arachnos?!

 

 

All the clues have been pointing towards the missing supers being transported to another dimension for some nefarious reason, and now Arrow Girl has run across a cross-dimensional incursion from Primal Earth!

 

 

Arrow Girl defeats the Arachnos boss and breaks their dimension-hopping hardware.  Having discovered what happened to the missing people, rescued one, and stopped the Arachnos incursion, it's mission accomplished when she reports to Chimera, and the end of the arc.

 

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This arc really felt perfect for a level 19 Praetorian.  I liked the way the investigations were set up, it really felt like we were doing detective work.  There were a lot of chained objectives but they were on indoor maps and each objective seemed to lead deeper into the map, so there wasn't a ton of backtracking.  Good use of Praetorian and Arachnos factions, none of them felt overpowered for my lowbie blaster. I liked the Praetorian lore and the obvious infighting between the various Praetorian factions.  Chimera was kind of characterized as being a mean boss, but this is fully in character for a Praetor who regularly murders his subordinates when they get uppity.  I would've liked an architect souvenir from this arc - it didn't look like it awarded one.

 

I gave this arc 5 stars.  Arrow Girl hit level 20 while playing through this arc, triggering Marchand to phone to tell her to go through the portal to Primal Earth - a perfect match for the story.

Edited November 21 by Police Woman

[Darmian]

On 11/21/2024 at 5:52 AM, Police Woman said:

Arrow Girl hit level 20 while playing through this arc, triggering Marchand to phone to tell her to go through the portal to Primal Earth - a perfect match for the story.

Although the story itself continues with The Cassini Division and concludes with The House of Gaunt Saints. 

Apologies for the lack of a souvenir. I've been meaning to add some but haven't gotten around to it. 

 

Again I was trying to provide more canon style missions for Praetorian characters once they hit the end of Neutropolis but before they go to First Ward/cross to Primal.

Edited November 25 by Darmian

[Darmian]

Actually @Police Woman, the initial idea for this arc was born from asking if anyone in Praetoria even noticed supers just vanishing when they hit level 20. Surely someone like Chimera would have spotted that and investigated.

[Police Woman]

Having reached level 20, New Heroes of Paragon (arc #42432) rose to the top of Arrow Girl's SFMA search.  This is a level 20-20 hero arc by @Electricboots where you babysit some young heroes and is both a Developer's Choice and a Hall of Fame arc.

 

So Arrow Girl gets sent to look after a group of kid heroes, who have lost a doll and have somehow run afoul of the Hellions.

 

 

I rescue Loud Girl and start looking for her brother, Super Captain Man.  But when I rescue him, something odd happens:

 

 

My objective is "Bring Miss Loud to Super Captain Man", but ... they're right next to each other now?  Completing this objective required me to walk the two of them back to Miss Loud's spawn point, not sure why ... some bugginess with the chained objectives, I assume.

 

After rescuing the two kids and defeating the boss, we still haven't found the doll, so Super Captain Man asks me to rally the troops - running around Steel Canyon to tell the other New Heroes of Paragon to come to their secret base.

 

 

It was kind of a pain to find the various New Heroes, who were scattered over a large map.  However, there were lots of diversions that made it more fun.

 

 

 

 

After rounding up the rest of the team, Arrow Girl got invited to their secret base.

 

 

While there, we get attacked by a bunch of humanoid sewer rats who were actually ridiculously adorable.

 

 

The supergroup meeting resolves that we need to uncurse the doll, and to do this we need to get a magic urn from a spoooky cave.

 

It's a g-g-ghost!!

 

The urn is guarded by some ancient being known as Shulkead, who had several tricks up its sleeve and was actually quite well written and fun.

 

This wasn't even its final form

 

After recovering the urn, we finally go on a mission to "uncurse" the magic doll.  Arrow Girl has to round up some allies again and perform a complicated magic ritual.

 

Well that's not a good sign.

 

Performing the ritual involves clicking a series of glowies.  Something frustrating happened on the last glowy, where it spawned the "final boss" of the story arc, but the New Heroes blocked the doorway so I couldn't reach the boss or even get line of sight; the room I was in wasn't big enough for me to lead my followers away from the doorway.  As a result, the kids ended up defeating the final boss before I ever got to see it.

 

Hey, down in front!  (Not pictured: another ally pounding the heck out of the final g-g-ghost with a baseball bat)

 

 

Overall I thought this was quite a fun story arc.  The plot was straightforward, but the writing was good (assuming you don't mind taking the role of babysitting a bunch of kid heroes) and there was a lot of set dressing in every map that helped make each mission more interesting.  The custom characters were well-done; I liked both the karate punks and the ratkins.  The triggered objectives seemed a little buggy (I think freeing Miss Loud first in the first mission ended up breaking the chained objectives, along with the allies blocking the door in the last mission) but I don't think these are necessarily the arc's fault.  The allies were pretty overpowered; they spawned as EBs for me, while named enemies were typically bosses or lieutenants, so the allies typically could win without me lifting a finger.  I was torn between rating this 4 or 5 stars, ended up giving it 5 stars because of all the good parts.

 

Arrow Girl finished the arc at level 20 and 6/10ths.

Edited November 24 by Police Woman

[ZamuelNow]

With this stopping just shy of level 21,  I'm wondering if this is finished.  If so, what all observations did you make with this playthrough overall?

[sponazgul]

Hey, I'm enjoying reading your journey.

 

I try to make AE arcs that scale down and scale up - If you don't mind playing Shadows over Brickstown (I forget the arc number, but my global is @First of Equals)

 

I've done my story arc EXPLODING PLANET (arc 22784) a few times with very low level characters, so it might be a good run for you. If you try it out, don't be discouraged if missions fail here  and there, or if the planet explodes. Sometimes, the planet explodes.

[Police Woman]

Sorry for the long gap - holidays have been eating up a lot of my time.

 

Arrow Girl's next adventure was The Last Full Measure (arc #25396), part 3 of the Ordinary People epic by @cranebump.

 

 

 

Following the events of the last arc, Blue Steel sends Arrow Girl to check out a Skullions warehouse where they're holding a lot of contraband tech.  While there, Juan Jimenez joins up with her, along with an Operative Demare that is also investigating the theft of Arachnos tech and ... seems trustworthy?

 

Curse your sudden but inevitable betrayal!

 

Despite Demare not being a team player, we manage to confiscate a lot of Rikti tech and vibranium (!) that the Skullions were holding for delivery to Project Orion, a group mentioned in the last story arc. The Arachnos connection from Operative Demare's appearance leads Blue Steel to send Arrow Girl next to clear out an Arachnos base in the nearby sewers.

 

In the sewers, Arrow Girl crosses paths with a mysterious agent of Project Orion.

 

Defeating "Who?" gives me some Project Orion security badges, and clearing out the Arachnos boss scores me some encrypted Arachnos data, though it appears they carelessly left the filenames unencrypted.

 

 

On the way to the next mission, Blue Steel warns me that "Powers Division" is coming to arrest us all, including Blue Steel and basically every police officer in Kings Row (Freitag, Becktrees, Jimenez and Dempsey are all mentioned)!  This ... makes no sense to me.  We haven't been doing anything illegal (just investigating Skullions and Arachnos) and it exceeds my sense of disbelief that anyone could trump up enough charges to convince the police to arrest multiple police officers, including the main PPD superhero.  On top of that, Blue Steel wants to react to this by stealing and destroying evidence, which does not sound like something an honest cop would do.

 

Nevertheless Arrow Girl goes in and fights the police to steal the evidence.  The PPD themselves seem a little surprised by this turn of events.

 

I know, right?

 

Recovering the evidence I finally find out some names of Project Orion people: they all seem to have ties to the (now ruined) Galaxy City, and they have a complex plot that has, apparently, been driving events throughout the Ordinary People epic. 

 

This leads Arrow Girl to the Orion base, where she has to fight a rogues gallery of Project Orion bosses, all disgruntled former Galaxy City residents.

 

 

While there, I discover they've taken Prince Kiros hostage..... or have they??

 

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Oh no!  Prince Kiros was behind Project Orion all along!

 

 

After narrowly escaping an ambush, the next mission sends Arrow Girl to.... SPAAACE!!  It appears Project Orion's master plan is to drop a meteor on Paragon City ... for ... reasons ... revenge!  Something like that!  Eh, let's go with it, we're going to SPAAAACE!

 

 

After clearing out some Project Orion lackeys, I round up all the Kings Row heroes (who joined me in SPAAACE) and defeated the big boss.

 

 

But first, a villain monologue

 

Arrow Girl catches too much aggro and gets defeated twice during this battle, but considering it's the epic finale and in SPAAACE, I'm OK with the difficulty - I probably should've let good old Acrobattle or Whipsmart's bots tank for us.

 

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Overall thoughts:

I had a lot of fun, and the missions were well-crafted, but I thought the plot didn't make much sense.  I liked the grand finale in SPAAACE and I liked that all the Kings Row heroes reappeared in the big fight at the end (yes, even Whipsmart).  I gave it 4 stars.  Arrow Girl ended at about level 20.85.

 

Plot stuff within the following spoiler tag.

 

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Prince Kiros's evil plan required using the stone from the Constellation necklace to research the Shivans, but the inciting event for Ordinary People Part 1 was that I'm investigating the theft of this necklace by the Skullions.  Why even have the Skullions steal your own necklace, only to give it back to Project Orion because you need it?

 

Project Orion was setting up fake witnesses to get them into Powers Division to sneak around and steal technical data, but they also somehow convinced Powers Division to arrest basically all of Kings Row PD.  If they had this level of influence over Powers Division, they could've just taken that data instead of coming up with a super complicated plan to steal the data.  (Also I still don't believe anyone could convince the PPD to arrest Blue Steel, and even if this did happen, Blue Steel wouldn't respond by destroying evidence.)

 

Also poor Willie from Ordinary People Part 2 is name dropped a couple times in an effort to generate pathos.  But Willie was murdered by the Gatling Gang, who is not even mentioned in this arc, not even as part of the Master Plan.  This blunts the impact of the callback because the connection between Project Orion and Willie's fate is tenuous.

 

More minor, but clue 7 (Project Orion security badges) hints that these will be useful, but I don't believe they're never mentioned again, even when we attack the Project Orion base and might want to use them.

 

Also minor, but I would've liked the special "Who is this?" boss to be someone more important than a generic lieutenant (since the "Who is this?" name seems to flag that model's name as being important) - maybe you could make him one of the three adjudicators for some even earlier foreshadowing.

 

Some typos I noticed within the next spoiler tag.

 

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palce -> place

 

Prince Nandelu homeland -> Prince Nandelu's homeland

 

invesigation -> investigation

 

"don't hear from he" -> don't hear from me

 

"rearch" -> research

 

"Downlad" -> Download

 

 

Brinnell -> Brinell (in 2 places)

 

 

Basically every member of the "Project Orion Staff" enemy group has the default description ("A Minion is no match for a Hero" etc).

 

Well, done, Arrow Girl -> Well done, Arrow Girl

 

long, weay -> long way

 

"Destroy the guidance system., Defeat Galaxian" -> "Destroy the guidance system, Defeat Galaxian"

 

"Did they think there would be not price to pay" -> Did they think there would be no price to pay or Did they think there would not be a price to pay

 

Galaxian has the default description, but as the final boss, really should have a detailed description.

 

 

Adjudictors -> Adjudicators

 

Could I suggest a fragment of the Constellation necklace, or a piece of the meteor that we diverted, as a better and more tangible souvenir than a handshake?

 

 

Edited December 15 by Police Woman

[Police Woman]

Arrow Girl's next adventure was Manhunt (arc #45987) by @Flying Carcass, a level 8-20 Villainous arc where a bank heist goes wrong.

 

 

My contact is a shady character calling himself Mike Powers who has some unspecified criminal job he wants me to take.  Once I agree to this mystery mission, he reveals that it's a fairly standard bank job, only the bank is full of heavy gold bars that need to be teleported out to the getaway van.  Meanwhile I'm supposed to escape in a different getaway car.  This sounds a little suspicious, but a bank robbery seems like a great opportunity to make a Dark Arrow Girl costume:

 

 

Arrow Girl fought her way to the vault, defeated the hero protecting it, and attached the gadgets that teleport the gold bars to getaway vehicle #1.  As she left the mission, though, we discover that getaway vehicle #2 never showed up, and the police are closing in!  Oh no, the contact has screwed her over!

 

Ducking into a nearby building, Arrow Girl beat up some homeless people and some overeager heroes and set off an explosion (using high explosives the Lost were stockpiling for .. reasons) to distract the police.

 

 

This distracts the police long enough for Arrow Girl to look for a new getaway driver, which involved searching a large outdoor city map looking for one specific hostage.  This mechanic is kind of annoying, and the mission itself really didn't make sense to me - what if my villain could fly, superspeed, teleport or stealth away?  Then I wouldn't need a getaway driver.  (In fairness, Arrow Girl can't do any of these things, because she leveled from 12 to 20 in AE so I didn't take a travel power.  But she could still hotwire a car or something!)  

 

The streets are full of caped "hero" types, both named and otherwise.  Some of the named heroes are kind of fun, and actually have some lines.

 

Finally I track down the getaway driver and "escape"!

 

 

Having escaped Paragon City, Arrow Girl tracked down her backstabbing contact and gave him a beatdown.

 

 

 

And that's the end of the story!

 

 

Overall I felt this story arc needed more writing; there's barely any text in the briefings, very few clues and each mission was pretty basic (about the same as a typical newspaper mission).  It is tagged as "work in progress" so maybe the author intended to add more content later? 

 

The first mission briefing has the contact not tell you anything before you agree to do the mission, which feels bad because the plot forces your character to be dumb and walk into this obvious betrayal.  I did like the various costumed heroes in mission 3, though I am not sure why a villain who could fly, teleport or stealth would need a getaway car, so the premise of the mission didn't really work for me.

 

The contact is not really developed as a character other than "greedy guy who betrays you".  Beating up the contact at the end seemed fine, but I think we should've ended up with the gold bars from the heist in the end, perhaps as an architect souvenir (I don't think the arc gave me one at all).

 

 

I gave the arc 2 stars.    Arrow Girl hit level 21, and finally exited AE and headed back into the real world. 

 

Thus ends my project to level up Arrow Girl from 12-20 in Mission Architect!  Thanks to everyone who has been following!

 

 

Edited Monday at 06:55 PM by Police Woman

[Police Woman]

On 12/13/2024 at 12:08 PM, ZamuelNow said:

I'm wondering if this is finished.  If so, what all observations did you make with this playthrough overall?

 

Sooo, some observations:

 

1. I had forgotten how fun it is to play through Mission Architect story arcs.  I had gotten into a rut of playing the same canonical PvE content over and over, and mixing it up with some creative MA story arcs was a breath of fresh air.  There's a ton of good story-focused content out there in AE, if you can find it.
2. Playing a low level squishy character, I was very sensitive to enemy difficulty.  Ambushes were particularly problematic for Arrow Girl.  Please don't tie 3 ambushes to a low level boss!  At default difficulty that boss is just a lieutenant that I can defeat with 2 attacks - resulting in 3 simultaneous ambushes.
3. As a Praetorian character I could only get to AE via Pocket D (I think?) and on my server there are a lot of AE farmers there.  So the AE area often looked really busy, but I don't think that many of the players were doing story-focused stuff.
4. It feels a little sad that there are story arcs published years ago that still only have a handful of play-throughs.
5. I am also kind of amazed that there are some AE authors that have 10 to 50 published story arcs.   I guess we have a small but dedicated crowd.
6. I worry a little that my critiques and ratings may be too harsh, but everyone who has responded has been pretty receptive to the feedback.

 

It was fun enough that I'm thinking about my next project to play-through and review arcs ... probably with different characters, maybe with different formats.

 

Edited Monday at 08:08 PM by Police Woman

[Darmian]

1 hour ago, Police Woman said:

• I am also kind of amazed that there are some AE authors that have 10 to 50 published story arcs.   I guess we have a small but dedicated crowd.

Looking at no one in PARTICULAR, @cranebump and @Ankylosaur.

 

1 hour ago, Police Woman said:

I worry a little that my critiques and ratings may be too harsh, but everyone who has responded has been pretty receptive to the feedback

Feedback is feedback. You didn't just trash things and state "This is Sh*t", and to be fair I've played a fair few that deserved that response over the years.  So thanks for the plays 🙂

[cranebump]

Considering you ran the first things I ever wrote, I'm happy they were playable at all.:-) 

 

As far as criticism goes, a thick skin and the ability to use anything actionable is worthwhile. I appreciate the "squishy" perspective, as I tend to run exemplared chars on my own and others' mishes. Nice to see how things would actually work in game.

[TygerDarkstorm]

9 hours ago, Police Woman said:

Arrow Girl's next adventure was Manhunt (arc #45987) by @Flying Carcass, a level 8-20 Villainous arc where a bank heist goes wrong.

 

 

My contact is a shady character calling himself Mike Powers who has some unspecified criminal job he wants me to take.  Once I agree to this mystery mission, he reveals that it's a fairly standard bank job, only the bank is full of heavy gold bars that need to be teleported out to the getaway van.  Meanwhile I'm supposed to escape in a different getaway car.  This sounds a little suspicious, but a bank robbery seems like a great opportunity to make a Dark Arrow Girl costume:

 

 

Arrow Girl fought her way to the vault, defeated the hero protecting it, and attached the gadgets that teleport the gold bars to getaway vehicle #1.  As she left the mission, though, we discover that getaway vehicle #2 never showed up, and the police are closing in!  Oh no, the contact has screwed her over!

 

Ducking into a nearby building, Arrow Girl beat up some homeless people and some overeager heroes and set off an explosion (using high explosives the Lost were stockpiling for .. reasons) to distract the police.

 

 

This distracts the police long enough for Arrow Girl to look for a new getaway driver, which involved searching a large outdoor city map looking for one specific hostage.  This mechanic is kind of annoying, and the mission itself really didn't make sense to me - what if my villain could fly, superspeed, teleport or stealth away?  Then I wouldn't need a getaway driver.  (In fairness, Arrow Girl can't do any of these things, because she leveled from 12 to 20 in AE so I didn't take a travel power.  But she could still hotwire a car or something!)  

 

The streets are full of caped "hero" types, both named and otherwise.  Some of the named heroes are kind of fun, and actually have some lines.

 

Finally I track down the getaway driver and "escape"!

 

 

Having escaped Paragon City, Arrow Girl tracked down her backstabbing contact and gave him a beatdown.

 

 

 

And that's the end of the story!

 

 

Overall I felt this story arc needed more writing; there's barely any text in the briefings, very few clues and each mission was pretty basic (about the same as a typical newspaper mission).  It is tagged as "work in progress" so maybe the author intended to add more content later? 

 

The first mission briefing has the contact not tell you anything before you agree to do the mission, which feels bad because the plot forces your character to be dumb and walk into this obvious betrayal.  I did like the various costumed heroes in mission 3, though I am not sure why a villain who could fly, teleport or stealth would need a getaway car, so the premise of the mission didn't really work for me.

 

The contact is not really developed as a character other than "greedy guy who betrays you".  Beating up the contact at the end seemed fine, but I think we should've ended up with the gold bars from the heist in the end, perhaps as an architect souvenir (I don't think the arc gave me one at all).

 

 

I gave the arc 2 stars.    Arrow Girl hit level 21, and finally exited AE and headed back into the real world. 

 

Thus ends my project to level up Arrow Girl from 12-20 in Mission Architect!  Thanks to everyone who has been following!

 

 

Not to be mean, but this arc just sounds like an alternate version of the Firewire storyline in Mercy.