I'm looking for Feedback for my first two arcs, which are now completed. I really want to thank Darmian, Akylosaur, Cranebump and my friends in Twitch for playtesting Part 2. Part 2 was a struggle to make work, but with all their feedback I think it plays much better now. There were major changes to just about every mission. I really hope people enjoy these first two parts. I am now planning and writing the finale. I am definitely shooting for the moon in the final part--should make for proper drama if I pull it off.
Any and all feedback is much appreciated!
Cheers,
@valeyard
Arc ID 25906 -- Heart of Words Part One
Arc ID 54637 -- Heart of Words Part Two