Mender Ramiel arc, speaking to Lord Recluse about Incarnate power, when the Well speaks through Recluse:
'He craves power, but seeks to gain it in every other method save for ones connected to myself.'
should be
'He craves power, but seeks to gain it through every other method save for ones connected to me' or maybe 'He craves power, but seeks to gain it via every other method save for ones connected to me'.
Also:
'He tracked down an item that is connected to myself, an Incarnate artifact, if you will.'
should be
'He tracked down an item that is connected to me; an Incarnate artifact, if you will.'