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Police Radio mission: 'POLICE ARE REPORTING THAT THEY HAVE BEEN UNABLE TO LOCATE DR. BOYCE BOYD, THE NOTED CYBERNETIC RESEARCH.' should be 'POLICE ARE REPORTING THAT THEY HAVE BEEN UNABLE TO LOCATE DR. BOYCE BOYD, THE NOTED CYBERNETIC RESEARCHER.'

Allison King, Retrieve one of the spirit thorns, mish briefing: 'The researchers at MAGI hope that if they can her hands on one, they can figure out exactly how the Circle is channeling power.' should be 'The researchers at MAGI hope that if they can get their hands on one, they can figure out exactly how the Circle is channeling power.'

Tour Guide badge, Founder's Hero: 'These memorials never fail to invoke the ponderance if you could ever do the same' Ponderance means weight or consequence, but here it seems to be used as if it meant to think about (which I can understand given the word ponder), but that isn't one of its meanings. Maybe change this to something like 'These memorials never fail to make you wonder whether you could ever do the same' Not as interestingly worded, but more accurate.

Founders Falls tour guide badges, intro text: 'treat yourself to the only the best' Not sure what is meant here. If we're saying FF is both unique and better than other zones, then it should be 'treat yourself to the only, the best' [added comma] Or are we saying the reader deserves nothing less, in which case it should be 'treat yourself to only the best' [removed extra 'the']

Are these now meant to be disabled in PvP zones? I just went in to Bloody Bay, and both the Zero-G and Raptor Pack that I earned doing Safeguards were greyed out till I left the zone.

I noticed this with my previous character (an energy/rad Sentinel) and thought it was something to do with his powers. I guess not!

Phillipa Meraux, Stop Devouring Earth raid, briefing: 'World Watch is the brainchild of some of the most dedicated environmentalist's I know.' should be 'World Watch is the brainchild of some of the most dedicated environmentalists I know.'

Brickstown Tour Guide Badge, Fugitive: 'Through given the engineering complexities involved in containing super-powered threats, it is possible that this was unavoidable.' should be 'Though given the engineering complexities involved in containing super-powered threats, it is possible that this was unavoidable.'

Phillipa Meraux, Save the Crey lab from the Freakshow, mish completion text: 'After calling your contact, you receive instructions to hit the streets and see if you can find where the Freak's took the stolen technology.' should be 'After calling your contact, you receive instructions to hit the streets and see if you can find where the Freaks took the stolen technology.'

Talos Safeguard Mission briefing: 'It seems Arachnos has learned about the operation, and has decided to send teams into Talos Island to take advantage of the situation and sew terror on their own.' should be 'It seems Arachnos has learned about the operation, and has decided to send teams into Talos Island to take advantage of the situation and sow terror on their own.' This expression requires the version of 'sow' that applies to planting as opposed to tailoring.

Defeat all Family at Speilman Warehouse, mish entrance pop-up: 'Signs of struggle and property damage indicate that the Family, is already here.' Extraneous comma.

Brickstown Tour Guide mish, Mystic: 'MAGI has been notified but haven't been able to send out a arcane specialist to survey the location yet.' Two things: Should be 'an arcane specialist' Depending whether we're using US English that treats collective nouns as singular or UK English that considers them plural for verb agreement, it should be either 'MAGI has been notified but hasn't been able' (US) or 'MAGI have been notified but haven't been able' (UK) -- should be consistent.

Striga Tour Guide Badge, The Wolf's Snarl: 'That sounds terrifying, you do not envy any soldiers assigned to guard duty within.' should be either 'That sounds terrifying; you do not envy any soldiers assigned to guard duty within.' or 'That sounds terrifying. You do not envy any soldiers assigned to guard duty within.'

Roy Cooling, Finale: The Value of Life: The convoy is here now to bring Zanella and I back should be The convoy is here now to bring Zanella and me back

No, partner -- I couldn't have done it without you. 🦸‍♂️

Given that they didn't stop on 11 May, do we have a new date when the frequent Rikti invasions will end?

In the arc called The Magic Man from Mercedes Sheldon, two of the missions are supposed to have a pop-up upon mission exit containing a taunting note from the mysterious titular character, but these never appear. Get Answers From The Family Upon Exit of Mission As you leave Jimmy's office you see a note taped to the door addressed to you. 'Character. Do you remember the first time we met? I didn't think so, and I'd like to keep it that way. Rest assured that I'll be seeing you soon, but you'll never be seeing me.' -The Magic Man Check out the Cargo Ship Mission Exit You find another note taped to the door and signed by the Magic Man. 'Character, I didn't have time to plant the fifth bomb this time, so I'm sure you're happy about that. You're welcome. I'm sure Big Tony spilled his guts, again, so I'll see you on Talos Island, only this time, we end this dance.' -The Magic Man

Oops, serves me right for thinking I was the first to have the idea.

Any chance we could get something like this? Not exactly the same, but some sort of system to make getting the history badges more fun and lore-y. Would be nice if they sent us to pick them up in order so the story would flow.

OK, the general zone text for the tour guide mishs in Skyway actually made me LOL.

It's an area of a zone that changes based on stuff you've done in missions. As far as I can recall, it's used only in certain areas of Atlas & Mercy for some starter mishs, plus in DA, where it puts up a magical barrier effect after you've defeated Mot. The tricky thing is that these areas can appear differently to different characters, depending whether they have completed the specific missions, and a mob that crosses into one of these areas can disappear from one's view, depending which version of the area one is seeing at the time.

Exploration badge tip mission (Bright Star): 'While maybe not technically a business, in the same sense as other entries; the Paragon City University is also listed as a Rikti War historical location.' should be 'While maybe not technically a business in the same sense as other entries, the Paragon City University is also listed as a Rikti War historical location.' First comma is not needed, and semicolon should just be a comma.

Ah yes, I hadn't considered the phasing. Fair enough.

Just want to give a special shout-out to the devs who made sure to write the new mish text in the style and mood of the badges in any given zone. That's some real attention to detail there!

Staff Mastery power description: 'When either of these attacks are empowered with Perfection' should be 'When either of these attacks is empowered with Perfection' 'Either' is singular. The prepositional phrase 'of these attacks' doesn't affect the verb.