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[srmalloy]

The northernmost of the Bicentennial plaques in Independence Port begins "Paragon's involvement in World War 2 began on December 7, 1941, when Nazi German supersoldiers struck Independence Port." Unless Paragon City's history changes the entire history of WWII, Hitler didn't declare war on the US until December 10, 1941, doing so as a response to the US declaring war against Japan on December 8^th, so arranging to have supersoldiers attacking Paragon City the same day as Imperial Japan struck Pearl Harbor would have required Japan to have revealed their plans to Germany, breaking the secrecy of 'Operation Z' (the planning for the Pearl Harbor attack), and attacking on the 7th, prior to Germany declaring war against the US, would have created the same outrage against the Reich as the Pearl Harbor attack did against Japan. The text of this plaque should be changed to have a date of December 10^th or later -- as much as two weeks later, to allow the supersoldiers to be transported to the US coast, unless Hitler had advance knowledge of the attack to be able to pre-position the supersoldiers.

[LuckyDuck]

tiny one, from inside the Brickstown PD.

 

 

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PPD Sergeant: He's gotta come around sonner or later.

 

Edited Sunday at 05:46 PM by LuckyDuck
emphasis

[Rudra]

In the Rescue the Auction House Workers mission (edt: from Dr. Ann-Marie Engles), the rescued beat cop gives you a ledger. It says:

 

 The beat cop you rescued found this ledger in the auction house office. It shows that a number of expensive relics that been moved through this auction house. The profit from these sales has been channeled to an unnamed source. The funds from the last few transaction haven't been moved yet; they are still in the company's accounts.

 

There should be a "have" between the "that" and "been" so it reads as follows:

 

 The beat cop you rescued found this ledger in the auction house office. It shows that a number of expensive relics that have been moved through this auction house. The profit from these sales has been channeled to an unnamed source. The funds from the last few transaction haven't been moved yet; they are still in the company's accounts.

Edited yesterday at 12:24 AM by Rudra

[srmalloy]

When you're at the holocostume vendor and open the window to buy or convert aether, the menu still shows "Monstrous Aether Conversion", instead of "Unstable Aether Conversion". The actual conversion selection does show 'Unstable Aether', however.

[Ukase]

When you defeat the mino, you're asked if you want prismatic and monstrous aethers, instead of the new name, Unstable Aethers. On the reward table that pops up. Sorry I didn't take a screen shot. Got ported into the Font and had to pay attention. 

[mtharr]

Coule this Coming Storm, found this typo in the new story arc

[Kai Moon]

Not a specific typo report, but wanted to let folks here know about a related project at Homecoming Wiki.

https://homecoming.wiki/wiki/Category:In-game_text_errors

[ninja surprise]

Firstly I want to say this Ashling Corlett arc from Issue 28 Page 1 is fun!

Second, in the optional dialog with Vulcannon she might mean to say "I don't know how to say this" but the "how" is missing.

https://homecoming.wiki/wiki/Ashling_Corlett#Finale:_Consequences