TV Guide: Zhym's index to TerroirNoir's "Cable Channel of AE!" Reviews

[Ankylosaur]

It caused me to shorten Glitters to good effect... 🙂

[TerroirNoir2]

Again apologies to all for my slowness of late (hah!). It's not that I'm not enjoying the plays though!

 

 

[Darmian]

On 11/17/2022 at 3:29 PM, Zhym said:

Channel 3: @Darmian's "Dark Deeds" Series and More

• Bridge of Forever (Imperial Power, Ch. 6) [36642]
• The Cassini Division (Imperial Power, Ch. 7) [37104]
• The House of Gaunt Saints (Imperial Power, Ch. 8 )[37489]
• The Spark of the Blind (Neutropolis Warden, Ch. 5) [40403]
• Damnatio Memoriae (Neutropolis Warden, Ch. 6) [41140]
• The Eve of War (Neutropolis Warden, Ch. 7) [41583]
• Spirals: Part One (Imperial Crusader, Ch. 6) [55109]
• Spirals: Part Two (Imperial Crusader, Ch. 7) [55358]

 

 

 

I'll try to keep this updated.

Thanks for the update, @Zhym!

Edited November 9, 2023 by Darmian

[TerroirNoir2]

And I'm back albeit intermittently, like a slightly out of tune TV from the past..!

[Zhym]

22 hours ago, TerroirNoir2 said:

And I'm back albeit intermittently, like a slightly out of tune TV from the past..!

Woot!  Glad you're back.

 

BTW, I noticed something when editing the top post.  In the "All That Glimmers" 3.x series, here are the mission numbers:

• All That Glimmers 3.1: Summonings in Nerva Archipelago [43022]
• All That Glimmers 3.2: Ninjas in the Wind [40394]
• All That Glimmers 3.3: Gods in the Planes [43537]

Part 3.2 was published before the other two—May 2021 as opposed to August and September for 3.1 and 3.2, respectively.  @Ankylosaur, what's the story there?

 

[Ankylosaur]

So they say to write the ending first…

 

I wrote Ninjas in the wind as a standalone to explore Neo Tokyo and the Order of the Wind. It’s also why it has more plays than the others. 
 

Was really pleased with the arc, and it accomplished something I needed for another idea I had, which was to follow up on the Mu’Vorkan thing from the Dark Astoria series though my take on what was supposed to happen per the AMA is the opposite. But the struggle for power among the Mu/Scirocco is definitely the through line. 
 

After writing Glitters, where I had to completely change my original ending because my first one was not that good, for Glimmers I used Ninjas in the Wind as a clear destination for the stories preceding it. 
 

Overall Glimmers was a much more coherent story in my head from the beginning of writing it than Glitters.
 

Glitters is there now, but took a lot of rework to get there. Itwas my first multi arc attempt, sprawled a bit, and went on few tangents - not to mention needing to rework it to incorporate all the new Gold Brickers and their updated lore with the Aeon SF.
 

Anyway - each is pretty tight now - but 9 arcs is too long. It’s why Glints and Glows are 3. The All the Glows dates might be even weirder. But that is quite literally a different story. 🙂

Edited March 23 by Ankylosaur

[Darmian]

2 hours ago, Ankylosaur said:

but 9 arcs is too long.

Sez who? 😛

 

[Ankylosaur]

On 3/23/2024 at 8:27 PM, Darmian said:

Sez who? 😛

 

 

You're right of course. 🙂 

But at least I pared Glitters down from 12... Originally Glitters 1.1 - 1.3 was an intro to all of the different series - they all branched off it. But that was confusing to most - so now Glitters is simpler and linear, but the only one which has missions below level 20.

 

 (But yeah - people are more apt to commit to 3 and even that is a stretch.  One shots still seem to grab most attention, with Adventures in Wonderland being my most successful with 800 ratings between what it has now and what it had before I accidentally unpublished it. That is more than all my other 30+ arcs and their ratings added up. Oh and I noticed that Adventures in Wonderland is back on page one! Wish I had not lost my 780ish ratings, but no one to blame but me.)

 

Edited March 25 by Ankylosaur

[TerroirNoir2]

😄  Ha ha!

[Ankylosaur]

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• All that Glitters 3.2: Suspicious Maneuvers in St. Martial [37948]
• All that Glitters 3.3: Calamity in Kallisti Wharf [36693]
• All that Glitters 4.1: Risky War g4m3Z in the Rikti War Zone (post 1) (post 2) [37513]
• All that Glitters 4.2: Privateers in Praetoria [37754]

 

Just a small note to clairify why the All That Glitters lineup no longer looks like this in AE. 

 

Short version: These four arcs were replaced with one arc, tightening the story, and taking from 12 arcs to 9.

 

Specifically, after Engineria's playthrough it was clear it was way too long and I tightened up this section significantly.

• Removed 3.2 and 4.1 entirely
  • Originally Glitters was supposed to be 9 arcs - but after a poor initial ending, I wrote several more to carve a path to a new ending.
    • Really though, as demonstrated by the fix - it could easily fit in 9. Cut, cut, cut...
    • A few tidbits did get incorporated into what remained - some even moving upstream in the story - mostly into 2.3. 
  • The core of these two arcs were strong though, and had some connected contacts in The Doctor and Number 6. I re-purposed them with  a different story in my "Monkey" series (Almost called All That Gleeps 🙂 ) 
    • 3.2 got some different players and a new story.
      • This allowed me to also cover the one Praetorian group that made it to Prime that does not appear in my other arcs: The Syndicate
      • The setting of the isles also did not gel super well with the progression of the Gold Brickers expanding into hazard zones in Paragon
      • Was mainly in the isles to involve the wyvern contact and story there - and Wyvern going after the syndicate works just as well.
    • 4.1 touches on the Council and the Nictus after the Fall of Striga, (in Councilvania! 🙂 ) but I cover that in more detail now in All That Glints (Council/Awakened) and All That Glows (5th Column/Nictus).
      • So it was not that important to the All That Glitters story and had a fun Monkey angle I could work in instead.
      • This originally continued the theme of the Gold Brickers moving into hazard zones and brought Vanguard in for the Praetorian connection. But in the end the GB were barely in RWZ, and my "Kingston Heights" zone they rebuilt next to Khalisti became more important. Also this story did not really revolve around them, but more the Rikti Freakshow, UPA, and the Council, so felt a bit tangential.
• Combined 3.3 and 4.2 
  • Realized there was some overlap and maybe a-little-too-slow reveal of info.
  • A few defining moments were in those two arcs though, so I combined them into one action-packed one - still called Calamity in Kalisti Wharf.

 

Edited September 23 by Ankylosaur