Sure! It's 100% theory crafting, so I'm can't claim anything in there works. The biggest improvement I can think of would be to drop hasten for eye of the storm, and I'm not sure if serpent or innocuous is the better choice of the two. I'm thinking they're just not powers that mesh well. With defenses and pools, the offense is too weak, but fixing that would gimp my primary powers or wreck the hover, combat jumping, and evasive maneuvers triad.
I'm leaning more towards Rad/SS since I have a character idea of a humorously bad robot, so it's not a critical loss if it can't be salvaged.
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