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TorrentYed

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  1. I loved the arc! It felt like a wonderful continuation into the universe's lore, with some neat hooks for the future. Now, for nitty gritty, I just have some minor corrections I might make regarding mission text for 'The Graveyard Shift'. In the interest of not being too spoilery with my screenshots, I'll try to blur all but the salient details, but consider this a caveat for those that haven't done the blue side arc yet! Regarding Chapter Two: I would suggest changing 'small time' to 'small-time' in its usage here. Regarding Chapter Three: 'suprisingly' can be corrected to 'surprisingly' In the opening text for the door mission, I would suggest using the Oxford comma, since I've seen it used elsewhere in the arc. This dialogue appears when interacting with an object; 'avenue' can be capitalized here. This appears in clue text. 'Rejuvenaton' can be corrected to 'Rejuvenation.' Regarding Chapter Four: This occurs when Dr. Pierce is asked if she recalls something being said. 'Hesistate' can be amended to 'hesitate.' Regarding Chapter Five: In this NPC dialogue, 'negotations' can be corrected to 'negotiations.' Regarding Chapter Six: This another place where the Oxford comma could be used. Regarding the Heroic Finale: In this NPC dialogue near the end, either the comma after 'Oh' could be replaced with a period, of 'Hey' could be made lowercase. Wonderful job again with this arc, and I look forward to seeing what else you guys come up with!
  2. It's hard to know what to say. Neutron was a genuinely warn person, the type of person that leaves an impression for their kindness. It was always nice to hear him in voice, and it is an honor to have gotten to meet him. I hope he rests well.
  3. These are some fantastic changes, and testing them out so far I haven't had any issues with them. (And to echo @ArchVileTerror, it would be amazing seeing the Walk animations proliferated across genders at some point as well.)
  4. I'd like to chime in with my displeasure in regards to the Shinobi-Iri change as well, and to echo a lot of what has been said. This change kills a lot of flavor, both in terms of playstyle and aesthetic. By pairing Shinobi-Iri with Ninja Run or Beast Run, combined with some tailored slotting, we were able to realize the character fantasy of having that speedster ninja without being locked to the standard run animation just, you know, sped up. We could have the monstrous and beastly minded terror barreling through the Etoiles. And though it might mean sacrificing set bonuses to do it, we could keep up with the other speedsters while being true to our concepts. A whole lot could be said about movement animation cycles available to characters in general (Walk, looking at you), but to keep it on point to the suggested changes in this thread: people have invested various resources, time, influence, creative energy into. With this change all of this is negated, in a game that is all about that character fantasy, about spending time deliberating between costume pieces, about crafting a fun biography, about choosing different powers and the ways those powers look to make fun, unique individuals. Hamstringing so many of those individuals with this change like this feels like a mistake.
  5. Nevermind.
  6. SG Name: Canine Chic Base Code: CHIC-10348 In-Game Contact: @Ruaidhri This is a personal residence, located on a personal island to the North of Talos. Designed as a place of both work and leisure, it features amenities tailored to its owners tastes as well as his professions (cape on or not), with friends and guests in mind. Enjoy the view of the natural hot spring from the balcony, or enjoy the waters for yourself. It may belong to a fire starter, but the water's just fine.
  7. For folks that want to convert the knockback in their powers to knockdown without compromising their builds, would it be possible to create an IO that could be slotted into one of the different sprint powers or Rest itself?
  8. Just want to say I love your videos, Dacy!
  9. Theme: Emerald, elegiacal, effervescent. Suggested by Hawt Dawg and worn by someone with a better chance of pulling it off.
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