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What I sincerely hope is the last mission of Dr. Q, the briefing: "We've tracked them down, they're in a section of caverns deep below the city". Semicolon, not a comma.

"[NPC] Supply co-ordinator: We provided the supplies as per our contract" - missing full stop. Still in Dr Q, although the end is in sight. "You successfully smashed the Nemesis Army base, proving the validity of your information", same problem. "It's almost as if the Rularuu in the Shadow Shard had been in contact with their bretheren", typo for "brethren". " This will mean strikes against several seperate bases, and I doubt any of them will be easy", typo for "separate".

Later in Dr Q, we find a clue that refers to a "portal gate-way". The hyphen is spurious. At the end of the mission, we're told "Your team has taken the lab and contained it's occupants." its/it's again.

On reflection, since you're allowed to use _a_ P2W vendor during a TF, I really can't see any reason not to let you use any P2W vendor.

(These are all from Dr Q's Task Force, to help any dev grepping for them later...) A clue later in the same arc (second rescue-n-explorers mission) says "then the knowledged gained by his sad end". "Knowledge". Incidentally, it's not really clearly to me why the Crey have the friendly dialogue mentioned above. It might make sense if they were neutral NPCs who don't aggro unless attacked, like many Praetorian spawns. "I thought we were done for" is another piece of dialogue that overflows to Nemesis in these spawns. "There may also be other information and samples that Crey has gathered, capturing those will be highly advantageous, but not neccessary for victory." Semicolon before capturing, and "necessary" is misspelled. On the first "Defeat all Crey at base", the entry popup says "You're here for one purpose: To shut down Crey's plans." Bogus capital T.

SCORE changed the jetpack vendors in the Shadow Shard to P2W Vendors with their wider selection of materials. Hooray... except the time when you are most likely to want very badly to buy jetpack juice is on a Shadow Shard Task Force, and you can't use these vendors while on a TF. I submit this should be rectified somehow.

Dr Boyd, on first meeting him in the Shadow Shard, complains of "contsant" attacks by ravenous monsters. I'm off to solo all four SSTFs in order so I hope I might uncover a typo or two on the way. Right out the gate, Dr Q can call you "Task Force Bernouili". I suspect he means "Bernouilli". Crey NPCs in Firebase Zulu can say "Thank's for the assist". Even as misplaced apostrophes go, that one's pretty awful. Mixed Crey and Nemesis groups sometimes have swapped dialogue - eg Nemesis saying "You got this, Hero?" (which Crey also say) or "Nemesis is a Madman!" (with a bonus bogus capital letter). Debrief: "the natives know better than to disect a natterling". Typo for "dissect". Next briefing ends "Good luck", no full stop.

Well, now I really don't know what - if anything - I should do.

Mender Silos TF, second mission: "You learned from Manticore, that Arachnos also planned an attack in Striga." Bogus comma. A clue is titled '"Narcotics Shipment' - ie, a loose double quote, says "you didn't notice what was in all the those crates", and refers to "anti depressant medication". I think antidepressant is one word, not two. "Something compels you open this cardboard box" - missing "to" in this glowie text. "hand written" is used twice; I would say "handwritten".

Unai Kemen: " I want you to have the best Enhancementsavailable." Space missing. Many radios say "Mission Accomplished". Spurious capital, missing full stop.

I'm not entirely consistent about this. I would generally tend to ignore common errors - after all, they are common. However, I do tend to report particularly clunky phrasing, even though people do sometimes employ clunky phrasing.

Enriched Plutonium salvage: "Uranium that has been enriched into a weapons-grade Plutonium." Spurious capital P. Spurious "a". Also, that's not how uranium enrichment works, but that might be a bit beyond the scope of typo-fixing.

Jenkins is a rich vein of typos. In "Purge software", Bobcat says "Yes Praetor Berry, I will ensure that the software remains safe" - missing comma after "Yes". Serpent Drummer says "We should go see Tina Macintyre to and see if she has any ideas on what your next move might be". Not sure what "to and see" was meant to be. "You have purged the file, no more copies exist in Praetoria" - semicolon would be better than a comma here, but also the next mission (against Neuron) has me deleting another copy. Next mission: "You have purged the file, this looks to be the last remnants of Vanguard's software" - suggest "the file; that appeared to be". Semicolon, and past tense. "Even with my defeat, you can not win!" Suggest "cannot". Debrief; Jenkins says "we defintely don't need it to be a surprise". "Definitely" is misspelled. In Warrior Earth: Champions of all types have a description that refers to "War Earth". "You have recovered the Dimensional Resonator, you need to return this to Tina Macintyre." Semicolon, and you aren't returning it to her because she never had it. Tina says "I wonder why they were setting this up on Warrior Earth though?" - comma before "though". "With those Resonators in place, Emperor Cole will be pleased" lacks a full stop. "She created it using similar methods that the Midnight Squad created the Shadow Shard to imprison Rulaaru" - "similar methods to those that the Midnight Squad used to create the Shadow Shard to imprison Rulaaru." Much later, when you go to fight Infernal: "She's bound to him and has no free will of her own, if she's involved then Emperor Cole is defintely pulling the strings. The Praetorian Infernal acts as her bodyguard on occassion, if they have Positron, it's going to be a tough fight. I need you to get to Infernal's Lair and see if they have him. Infernal keeps his lair in the tunnels system under Praetoria. You'll likely encounter Resistance as well, and they tend to shoot first and ask questions later." Semicolon after "no free will of her own". "occasion" is misspelled, and also wants a semicolon not a comma after it. In the mission where you fight Diabolique, her description is a rather minimalist ".". "Dominatrix: I've been to your world, it needs a bit more Emperor Cole in my opinion!" Suggest "I've been to your world; in my opinion, it needs a bit more Emperor Cole!", but in any case the punctuation needs corrected.

In "Defeat Praetorians, destroy stolen scanner" (Maria Jenkins again), BCUs say "The Scanner will bring Peace to Praetoria" and "Hand over the Scanner". Spurious capital letters.

The next mission in the arc has the compass instruction be, eg, "4 Destroy the scanners!". Suggest "4 scanners to destroy".

Sorry to multipost - can't edit. When I say "insturmental" was reported elsewhere in this thread, I mean in a different bit of Jenkins' arc. I'm not (intentionally) reporting stuff that's already known.

Maria then says the scanners "kept us aprised of the situation in Praetoria". Should be "apprised". (This forum has the bug where sometimes editing a post fails with the cryptic error "REQUIRED".)

Maria Jenkins, A Hero's Epic Part One. "By now you know, Praetoria and it's tyrannical Emperor". Its/It's confusion, and that comma doesn't look right to me either. Suggest "By now you know that Praetoria"... Also, "Several heroes, including yourself, have been insturmental" - typo for instrumental (also reported elsewhere in this thread). "these villains can not be contained", suggest "cannot". "Chimera had on his person the motherboard to the off-line scanner" (clue received after beating him). This sentence structure is ghastly. Suggest "Chimera had the motherboard for the offline scanner on his person".

Chief Interrogator Washington, Finale: Wolf in a Wool Suit: "Mrs. Swift has taken her interrogation very well, she's already provided me with some intriguing information, namely that she isn't the only member of the Syndicate in this curious case." Comma soup. Suggest a full stop or semicolon after "very well".

Interesting. I used to do a lot of super packs, but ATO prices seem to be down, and boosters off the 1.5 million mark.

I hope I haven't choked this by writing so much. 😞

I think a year later we might conclude that's less likely than it seemed.

But don't buy with merits and don't buy recipes. Buy attuned enhancements. I doubt 1 million is a long way away. It's two pieces of orange salvage. I'm willing to bet at level 30 you've had considerably more than two orange salvage drops.

Is it worth mentioning the PDP has two entrances in Steel (the old and new ones from live), but the exit always dumps you out the new one behind Icon?

Summer Blockbuster, when the Grifter is trying to get all the words of the passphrase, if you pick the first magazine Ted Dubois mentions the casino's "ammenities" twice. One of the dialogue options for you also mis-spells the word. Furthermore I think you are offered an opportunity to "Make Ammends" to Sylvia.