Focused Feedback: Issue 28, Page 2 - New Badges

[Faultline]

7 minutes ago, Rikmach said:

So it's possible to lock yourself permanently out of getting the badge?  Or just lock yourself out of getting it *that run*?

 

Just that run. The arc is very complex and relies on your character's decisions a lot, so depending on which choices you pick, you'll lock yourself out of the relevant options that run.

[Doc_Scorpion]

Went and found the exploration badges in Kallisti Wharf, and the Tip System worked as expected and I got the accolade.  Have some thoughts on some of the wording, but it's late and I'm tired and want to think on it a bit.

[ZamuelNow]

The title for the exploration tips is "Blacking Industries Data Chit".  Guessing that should be "Blackwing" instead based on reading the text under it.

[Doc_Scorpion]

OK, it's morning and my thoughts...



"Understand" in the last sentence should likely be "understanding"



I get what you're trying to say here - the gas station becomes the property of the City.  But property doesn't "become" eminent domain, it's "purchased under" eminent domain [for a reason].  (Eminent domain is the ability of the government to force a property owner to sell the property to the government because the government is going to build a school, a new sewer plant, or some other public good.)