I hard disagree with needing softcapped ranged on top of S/L. Building for that would gimp your build quite alot. On my Ice/Psi just S/L is enough for me to solo basically any +4/x8 content I walk into, especially with drain psyche being basically perma instant regeneration, and shock wave disorienting a quarter of the mob each time. With Elec you have much more active mitigation than my Ice so I think you'll be great on survivability.
As far as single target, dominators have the same melee damage modifier as blasters so I try to prioritize the melee attacks. My chain is the ST hold, probe, thrust, and the snipe. I very highly recommend replacing mind probe with the snipe, it is really very powerful for taking down bosses. I also like to slot the ATO in your ST hold for the +Dam proc since you should be using it frequently. When the proc gets stacked it's really a significant damage bonus.
Otherwise, I like the build. Makes me want to try an elec dom :^)