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[Cinnder]

Jumped the Shark 'Forged by Hellfire' Tour Guide tip:

 

'...there are no shortage of accounts that detail the immense profits they make...'

 

should be

 

'...there is no shortage of accounts that detail the immense profits they make...'

 

Shortage is singular. The prepositional phrase 'of accounts' doesn't affect the form of the verb.

Edited December 6, 2021 by Cinnder

[ZorkNemesis]

Demagogue Day Job description.  The description mentions that you'll earn bonus Influence after a mission, but this Day Job is for Villains who would be earning Infamy instead.  The short description has it right.

[Molubdos]

Fungoid Minions being spawned from "Will of the Earth" crystals in certain missions (An Unnatural Order) seem to be being spawned with the "Mushroom_Beast_01" name.

It seems the other enemies it spawns are unaffected, including the Fungoid Lieutenants.

 

[wijnen]

In a clue from Mako's second mission, it says:

"undercover" in the last sentence should be "uncover".

[ZorkNemesis]

A random PPD mob was talking about keeping Galaxy City safe, while in Atlas Park near Back Alley Brawler...

 

[ninja surprise]

Looking at Trick Arrow for Controllers, Defenders, and Corrupters, "grounds" is misspelled. 

[Rudra]

Here's a fun Engrish one. In the Tobias Hansen arc, he gives you a mission to clear a mausoleum of Banished Pantheon. To aid you, he gives you Holy Shotgun Shells. The yellow text that pops up when he gives the shells is "Take with you these holy shotgun shells." Minor at best, but should be "Take these holy shotgun shells with you".

[Rudra]

On a side note, out of sheer humor, I love being given holy shotgun shells and no shotgun. With my mighty finger, I flick the back of the shell to fire it! 😄

[Cinnder]

Lt. Demitrovich, Distract Longbow in Nerva, Briefing:

 

'That should keep them busy well the Arachnos team gets their work done.'

 

should be

 

'That should keep them busy while the Arachnos team gets their work done.'

[Cinnder]

Nerva Wreck Tour Guide mission:

 

'Despite a plethora of confirmed villains operating in the area, none of them have approached the wreck.'

 

should be

 

'Despite a plethora of confirmed villains operating in the area, none of them has approached the wreck.'

 

(Prepositional phrase 'of them' does not modify the singular pronoun 'none')

 

also

 

'You have always wanted to lay on a bed of pirate gold.'

 

should be

 

'You have always wanted to lie on a bed of pirate gold.'

 

Assuming we mean to recline and not... uh... to get romantic...

[Cinnder]

11 hours ago, Rudra said:

"Take with you these holy shotgun shells."

 

I don't see anything wrong with that sentence.  It's ok to put the prepositional phrase in front of the direct object like that.

[Cinnder]

Lt. Demitrovich, Plant manifest on cargo ship, Debriefing:

 

'Even if Wyvern denies smuggling illegal goods it'll drive a wedge between themselves and Longbow.'

 

should be

 

'Even if Wyvern denies smuggling illegal goods it'll drive a wedge between them and Longbow.'

 

Incorrect usage of reflexive pronoun, because the 'it' in 'it'll' is the denial, not Wyvern.

[Rudra]

 

2 hours ago, Cinnder said:

 

I don't see anything wrong with that sentence.  It's ok to put the prepositional phrase in front of the direct object like that.

It may be okay to do so, though I have never seen it done so except in that instance, but it reads like a drunk telling a story.

[Rudra]

Did a search but didn't see this one already posted. Lars Hansen in Striga gives you a mission to defeat Council in their base. Completion gives you the mission to defeat the base commander and his men. However, the clue you find that sends you there says "These orders, found on a Council agents, read:". Agent should be singular. You find the orders on a Council agent, not on multiple Council agents.

[Rudra]

Don't know if this counts. Ashwin Lannister has a mission to capture Dr. Archon Pontiero. (In the wiki, it is listed as Dr. Ricci.) When you accept the mission to capture Archon Pontiero, he is suddenly now Archon Lucretia. Done this mission a few times. It is not part of any story arc. And this always happens. Mission "Capture Dr. Archon <insert name>" shifts to "Capture Dr. Archon Lucretia". It is not as funny as the myriad "Defeat Archon Archon <insert name>" missions in the same level range (20-30), but there it is.

[Rudra]

This one also does not turn up on a search of the topic. Still Ashwin Lannister. In the 1st Defeat Warriors in Talos Island mission he gives, he tells you that the Warriors are promoting members if they can defeat you. He then suggests you go beat some up to show it is a bad idea to use you for an "initiation trail". 1st, it should be an "initiation trial". (Insert joke about walking all over character here.) 2nd, it is missing the end punctuation.

[Rudra]

The Calling In A Favor tip mission in the 20-30 range blue side has a consistency error. So not really a typo, but this topic looks to be the correct place to flag this. The tip starts off by saying that the Family is going to eliminate witnesses. Then on the same window, it changes to saying the Family is going after jurors. Doing the mission, all the mobs refer to jurors. When the mission ends, the mission completion text references jurors. If the discrepancy in the tip itself is intentional, then color me confused and disregard this post. Otherwise, you should change witnesses to jurors in the launching tip.

[Pengy]

Citadel Task Force, 7th door mission: Defeat All Soldiers in Base (Talos)

Mission entry text reads "You manage to breech security..." It should be "breach".

[ember7401]

On the Prestige Power Return to Battle.. the power info reads 1 hr recharge but issue 27 Page 3 had an update that changed it to 2 hr.  Please update this power info please.

[wijnen]

From Mako:

"It was only through the intervention of .. that saved the Mu" is not a good sentence. One way to fix it would be change the ending into "that the Mu were saved".

[wijnen]

Later in that storyline, Daos says:

"play along and" should be "play along with".

[Rudra]

12 hours ago, wijnen said:

Later in that storyline, Daos says:

"play along and" should be "play along with".

They should probably fix the capitalization error while they're at it. The "w" in "we" should be capitalized since it is the first word of the 2nd sentence.

[Tatterhood]

Marshal Brass's dialogue when you "fail" the mission to prevent the TV broadcast:

"reign her in" should be "rein her in".

Edited December 18, 2021 by Tatterhood

[Tatterhood]

And in the souvenir for that same mission:

"made experiments" should probably be "mad experiments".

[Rudra]

Did a search of the topic and this didn't show as posted. On the tip mission Calling in a Favor, the active mission marker and the mission summary both say to go to the goon's hideout and arrest them. Since it is plural, you are arresting "them" and there are three goons you have to deal with, it should be goons' hideout instead.