A Hero's Epic Part Seven
Positron called me. He wants to go with you to the Shadow World to determine exactly what Tyrant's, I mean Emperor Cole's, plan is. Go see Tina Macintyre, I'm giving her the heads up that you are both headed over there.
The comma after Macintyre should be a period or semicolon.
Shadow Earth is Black Swan's personal dimension. She created it using similar methods that the Midnight Squad created used to create the Shadow Shard to imprison Rulaaru.
From Rescue Positron from Maria Jenkins:
A few years back when we first uncovered Praetoria, Statesman, rest his soul, was kidnapped by Tyrant and held in bonds. We had a theory that Statesman and Tyrant were nearly identical and that lead led us to believe that Statesman was powerless to against their technology.
A Hero's Epic The Final Chapter (closeout):
You did it, Lymelight! Positron has been rescued! Lymelight, I don't think I've ever been so proud! Positron sent his early prototype armor to you. He believes that you were insturmental instrumental in stopping a Praetorian invasion, something he and the Freedom Phalanx couldn't have done without your lead. Positron isn't careless with his praise, Lymelight; it seems pretty clear to me that he thinks the world of you.