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Synthetic Ribosome Exposure (END/RES) - last line of description says "Increases damage by 20.0% and reduces endurance costs by 33.0%."

 

Should say "Increases damage resistance by 20.0%......."

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In Tip mission (to villain) Reveal Ghoulish Delight's Identity, the enter message is:

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"go find one the" should be "go find one of the", or "go find the".

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When memorizing the knockback invention (any level), it's called "knockback duration". However, when using that "recipe", it will create a "knockback distance" enhancement. The regular recipe is correctly called "knockback distance".

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"a very strange temporal disturbances" should not have the a at the start, or not have the s at the end. The mission is "check out the temporal disturbance", so it seems the s needs to go.

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In a Clue in the Praetorian War, it says:

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Obviously, the : should be on the previous line, instead of the comma.

Also, it seems strange that Cole's supporters would call him Tyrant, but I suppose that's a historical thing.

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On 8/5/2021 at 2:39 PM, wijnen said:

In the introduction of a villain alignment mission, it says:

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"another think coming" should be "another thing coming".

In response to the above message, it was pointed out to me that "thing" was apparently wrong there. Now I'm seeing this in random NPC chat in Brickstown:

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Which sounds right to me, but isn't?

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Redside Archmage Tarixus mission:

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"Sharkhead Isle housed some of these relics (plural), but the ... Freakshow have stolen it (singular)" is incorrect.

Also, twice "for themselves" this close together is bad style.

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Description of a Rogue morality mission:

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At the start of the last part "At any case" should either be "In any case", or "At any rate".

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In a Clue for Doc Buzzsaw's Heavy Metal Doctoring missions, it says:

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However, Doc Buzzsaw is a woman, so "his" should be "her".

This happens in more clues in this mission:

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In the epilogue to Bobby Curtin's mission, the Miller says:

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It looks like the word "deserves" (or similar) is missing after "the price such a rare piece", or it could be "the price of such a rare piece".

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This is a screenie of Plaque #6? in First ward.

Not sure if it was intentional or not, but the part "stood at the van of an army..." Shouldn't that, or would it be better to be "stood at the vanguard of an army...".

Sorry if this was posted before. Having the damnest time going through the old posts :P

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No, van is fine.

AE SFMA Arcs: The Meteors (Arc id 42079) Dark Deeds in Galaxy City: Part One. (Arc id 26756) X | Dark Deeds in Galaxy City: Part Two. (Arc id 26952) | Dark Deeds in Galaxy City: Part Three. (Arc id 27233) Darker Deeds: Part One (Arc id 28374) | Darker Deeds: Part Two. (Arc id 28536) | Darker Deeds: Part Three. (Arc id 29252) | Darkest Before Dawn: Part One (Arc id 29891) |

Darkest Before Dawn: Part Two (Arc id 30210) | Darkest Before Dawn: Part Three (Arc id 30560) |

 Bridge of Forever ( Arc id 36642) | The Cassini Division (Arc id 37104) X | The House of Gaunt Saints (Arc id 37489) X | The Spark of the Blind (Arc id 40403) | Damnatio Memoriae (Arc id 41140) X  The Eve of War (Arc id 41583) | Spirals: Part One. (Arc id 55109) |  Spirals: Part Two. (Arc id 55358) |  Spirals: Part Three. (Arc id 57197)

I Sing of Arms and the Man (Arc id 42617) | Three Sisters (Arc id 43013)

(Pre War Praetorian Loyalist.  Pre War Praetorian Resistance.  Pre ITF Cimerora.  Post ITF Cimerora. X = Dev Choice/Hall of Fame )

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Hi,

Ouro Mission name:  Mind Freedom (Imperial Warden, Ch. 5)

I believe that the phrase "wreck untold havoc" should read "wreak untold havoc".

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In Operative Wellman's second arc, "Master of Destruction", the final mission "Destroy statues in Steel Canyon" has (at least) two Wyvern elite boss ambushes. When the elite bosses spawn, they say "We're going down, (player name)!" It should be "You're".

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LFG Queue - Story Arcs

 

Who Will Die? Part 1/7 [Alastor]

 

Level requirement says 10 to 120 (I wanna be max level now) Should be lvl 10 to 20

 

 

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@Tax E
 

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In Raid Yin Corp (Single Player), Yin says:

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He refers to Praetor Tilman as "he" (who is he to decide), but that should of course be "she".

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Zone: Talos Island
Contact: Barry Gosford
Arc: The Sky Raider Secret
Mission: Talk to Andrea Mitchell

 

there should be a "what" here

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