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[GastlyGibus]

Two typos I caught today.

Firstly, the description for Ice Slick from the Ice Control powerset for Controllers/Dominators reads

"You can create a large patch of ice at a targeted area, causing all foes that pass through it to tale cplose their footing."

 

Secondly, not exactly a typo, but Quick Strike from Kinetic Melee has the description of Frozen Fists from Ice Melee instead.

[Mendicant]

A text overlap glitch.

[Kai Moon]

Issue 1 TF design in a nutshell😆

 

I thought this was fixed, but this copy paste error is still in the game. Entry popup text in third mission of Faathim TF.

 

 

[srmalloy]

Not that it makes much difference, except to the people creating popmenus and then trying to figure out why they don't work, but in the Earth Control powerset, the tier 8 power "Volcanic Gasses", 'Gases' is the proper plural of 'Gas', not 'gasses'; one 's', not two.

[lemming]

7 hours ago, srmalloy said:

Not that it makes much difference, except to the people creating popmenus and then trying to figure out why they don't work, but in the Earth Control powerset, the tier 8 power "Volcanic Gasses", 'Gases' is the proper plural of 'Gas', not 'gasses'; one 's', not two.

Depends if you are using American or British.  I think Gases is the currently more popular version, so maybe back in 2005-2012, Gasses may have been a bit more in use in the US.

[TimesSeven]

In two goldside, Praetorian missions, "Check Out the Clockwork Disturbance" and "Check out OmniTek," the descriptions are missing from several clockwork.

 

 

[Malohin]

Still true. 🙂

[srmalloy]

In the Cold Domination set for Corruptors, Snow Storm is described as a Targeted AoE power, affecting your target and targets around them. Heat Loss, which has the same icon border as Snow Storm, and also affects your target and targets around them is described as a "Foe AoE" power. The description text should be consistent with the power type.

[Ridiculous Girl]

 

Mind probe: blaster mental manipulation, dominator psionic assault, and possibly sentinel's psionic mastery... It should read "wreaks havoc" rather than "wrecks". 🙂

[Rudra]

1 hour ago, Ridiculous Girl said:

 

Mind probe: blaster mental manipulation, dominator psionic assault, and possibly sentinel's psionic mastery... It should read "wreaks havoc" rather than "wrecks". 🙂

And "foes" should be "foe's" as well.

[Ridiculous Girl]

16 minutes ago, Rudra said:

And "foes" should be "foe's" as well.

missed that... 😄

[Ridiculous Girl]

and since i am on this topic as well as the power set... blaster, mental manipulation/ world of confusion. not sure about the others under psionic mastery, or psychic mastery. but the text reads "confusing an enemy is lower than then chance" rather than "lower than the chance". 🙂

 

EDIT: i can confirm that the psionic mastery/WoC for controllers and dominators, and psychic mastery/WoC for defenders and corrupters, has the same typo in the text

Edited December 16, 2023 by Ridiculous Girl

[Ridiculous Girl]

3 hours ago, Ridiculous Girl said:

 

this whole power description is a mess... as it reads "grip the minds of your foe", where it should read either "grip the minds of your foes" or "grip the mind of your foe". probably the latter since it is a single target attack.

Edited December 16, 2023 by Ridiculous Girl
added text for clarity

[Ridiculous Girl]

3 hours ago, Ridiculous Girl said:

 

 

For clarity's sake...

The whole text should read as... "Grip the mind of your foe with a Mind Probe. You must be in close proximity to pull off this attack that wreaks havoc on your foe's synapses, dealing moderate Psionic Damage while reducing their attack speed." 😅

 

thanks to Rudra for pointing out the other error. 🙂

[srmalloy]

14 hours ago, Ridiculous Girl said:

The whole text should read as... "Grip the mind of your foe with a Mind Probe.

All of your opponents have multiple-personality disorder...

 

[The Caretaker]

Slowly working my way from about seven pages back.

 

Stop being so good at noticing things! LMAO.

[The Caretaker]

Well, I hope you're happy.

 

CUMULATIVE NOTES

 

Cumulative notes:

 

Typo correction log:

 

BULK EDIT: "Freedom Corp " (Note the space at the end) to "Freedom Corps " " (Note the space at the end)

 

Captain Mako Arc Souvenir: "Broken Freedom Corps Badge" now referred to as a "Medallion" - makes more sense to be a broken medallion than a badge.

Within the souvenir a "Broken Freedom Corp " error now refers to a "Broken Freedom Corps Medallion"

 

Crimson, World Wide Red:

Clue: Leung Linwei's story: "Loosing" to "Losing"

Clue: Damaging dossiers and documents: "Politician's " to "Politicians' "

Clue: The missing connection: "Operation to hear" to "Operation to here"

"Finrenze" to "Firenze"

"Langly" to "Langley"

"Cover been exposed" to "Cover been blown"

"Firenze's going to be well protected by some of the baddest things that Malta can muster." to "Firenze's going to be well protected by some of the nastiest forces that Malta can muster."

"Afford to loose" to "Afford to lose"

 

Harvey Maylor

"It is likely that is amount of drugs" to "It is likely that this amount of drugs"

 

Dream Doctor

"The cavern is full of the Knives of Vengeance, who made this their home" to "The cavern is full of the Talons of Vengeance, who made this their home"

"Future ancestors" to "Future descendants"

 

Theoden

"Reverting to magic" to "Resorting to magic"

 

Agent Kwahu

"You and him" to "You and he"

 

Praetorian Penny Yin

"You and him" to "You and he"

 

SL8_Nemesis

"Afford to loose" to "Afford to lose"

 

Maria Jenkins

Take Down Nightstar: "Wiht" to "with"

"Tinge" to "Tingle"

"Apprised" to "Apprised"

 

Basse Croupier

Defeat Tsoo Racketeers: "Let's see if you shall" to "Let's see if you are"

 

Glacia

"Luring our" to "Luring out"

Multiple lines using "important" over and over:

"You looked through the remains of Darrin Wade's library to find any sort of important information. You find multiple journals and read them over, looking for anything important. It's odd that Darrin Wade would leave such important items here."

to

"You looked through the remains of Darrin Wade's library to find any relevant information. You find multiple journals and read them over, looking for anything noteworthy. It's odd that Wade would leave such vital and powerful items behind."

 

Specialist Greer

"Circle have are" to "Circle have is"

"They are vast" to "It is vast"

"but I believe for someone such as yourself" to "but I believe for someone such as you"

 

Wavelength

"by riots in the street" to "be riots in the street"

 

Crey's Folly Reconnaissance Officer:

"- SWAT entrance: This SWAT entrance was closed down when the Rikti invaded for the second time, but has since been reopened with Rikti Traditionalist relations improving weekly. All activity is still monitored and policed via DPO centers manned by The Vanguard."

 

Flashfire

"Inside the envelope are a series of official-looking documents, each of which appears to be quite liberally censored." to "Inside the envelope is a series of official-looking documents, each of which appears to be quite liberally censored."

 

Maxwell Christopher

"All that left" to "All that's left"

 

Operative Wellman

"who development a method" to "who developed a method"

 

Blind Makwa

"let's" to "lets"

 

Master Midnight

"It's" to "its"

 

Archmage Hellewise

"It's" to "Its"

 

Atmospheric dialog

"My lost my family in Galaxy City. I'm so alone." to "I lost my family in Galaxy City. I'm so alone."

"Pepeaceably" to "Peaceably"

 

Circle of Thorns SL7 arc

"Sewing" to "Sowing"

"The believed" to "They believed"

Lots of changes of "it's" to "its".

 

Carnival of Shadows SL9 arc

"elestial" to "celestial"

 

Psimon Omega

"docs" to "docks"

 

Mu'Drakhan

"Sewing" to "Sowing"

 

Hardcase

"increase demon attacks" to "increased demon attacks"

"but in turn" to "but in return"

"his soul his released" to "his soul is released"

 

Jezebel Jones

"Your back" to "You're back"

 

Heather Townshend

Sigil no longer shouts her own name when Kadabra Kill... is killed.

 

Positron Part 1

Final Madness Mage guarding Azuria is, in fact, Rollister - and is named so.

Shadow Simulacrum #8 has their DisplayInfo.

 

Angelo Vendetti

"Kidnap a Council base leader" mission refers to Archon Winters and Winter, normalized to Winters throughout.

 

SL7 Crey arc

"won't hold up in court on it's own" to "won't hold up in court on its own"

"Be on your guard" -> Capitalized the B

Removed a duplicate "body" from a clue

 

Sunstorm

"Appology" to "Apology"

"Nightmare" decapitalized in rescue text

 

Rogue Morality Mission (SL4-5)

Fixed misplaced dialog entries confusing Skyraiders and Council

 

RandomFameString:

Issue: A wide swath of missions grant 'RandomFameString "P3958075051"' to NPCs to say after mission completion. This translates to 'string'. To amend this, I created 'RandomFameString "P39580750518675309"' to replace the offending entries with "Whoa, I know you..."

 

Reconnaissance Officer, Sewers:

"Conglomerate" to "Congregate"

 

SL7 Fifth Column/Council Arc

"Agustulus" to "Augustus"

"You have learned to much" to "You have learned too much"

"Arakahn" to "Arakhn"

 

St Martial Bartender

"What'll be be?" to "What'll it be?"

 

Long Jack

Archon in mission was calling a pstring for {BOSS_NAME} and somehow returning oddities like "Archon Archon Foss". Created a new PString for "Archon Foss" and left it at that.

 

SL4 Common Tasks

(Lost hunt in TV) "ago, And" to "ago, and"

(Sky Raiders hunt in TV) "drop Sky Raider" to "drop in Sky Raider"

"You have defeated 25 Family Thugs" ... "25" to "20"

 

Master Thao Ku is "a truly enlightened person", not "an truly"

 

"Save the Surgeons from the Vahzilok"

Sort of brilliant -> Short of Brilliant

Hopsitals -> Hospitals

 

SL5 Lost Arc

"Superidyne" to "Superadine"

 

Mr Bocor

"It's" to "its"

 

Tina Macintyre

"Tiny" to "Tinny"

Praetorian Arc (Old and New arc) fixed bad punctuation in clue "Anti-Matter's Warning"

 

Midnighter Introduction

"Met and discuss" to "Met to discuss"

 

Contact conclusions

"would like to met" to "would like to meet"

 

Icedrone's bio

Removed an extra quotation mark

 

Radio Missions

"the Witness" to "the witness"

 

Mender Ramiel

Captain Holtz has been degendered to "They/Them/Their". Text says male, model may only be female, but the lazy solution is to simply ambiguate the pronouns.

 

Phillipa Meraux

In the Rescue Ken and Kimberly mission, Kim has her own rescue text, and why it isn't working I'm not sure.

 

Operative Vargas

"Koralax" to "Coralax"

"Villainousness" to "Villainess"

 

Fortunata Gossamer

"Not apart of" to "Not a part of"

 

Devouring Earth

Missing DisplayNames field for Mushroom_Beast_01_Summon caused Will of the Earth to spawn critters with "Mushroom_Beast_01" as their names. Fixed.

 

Pandora's Box, Part 4

Dr. Harvan should not yell 'P856364347;P856364347' any longer. Maybe.

 

Max

"Discrete location" is now "discreet"

 

Multiple arcs

"Another thing coming" changed to "Another think coming"

 

Freakshow dialog

"Thowing" to "Throwing"

 

Alexandra Sideris

"returning these women" to "returning the senators"

 

Vigilante Tip "A jar of Shattered Flesh"

Fortunata and Tarantula have their lines swapped so they appear delivered in the correct order.

 

Number Six

Reese: "Keeping Praetoria" to "Giving Praetoria"

 

Neil Kendrick

"Technomagic" to "Technomagic"

 

Trilogy pool missions

"well read of" to "well read or"

 

Doc Buzzsaw

Slag Golems say "We're Slag Golems, and we're attacking" no longer. Now they say "We attack now!" Bless their dumb hearts.

"Well, think about, won't you?" to "Well, think about it, won't you?"

 

Ghost Widow

Dr. Crow is now Dr. Crowe throughout. Do not worry, he still moonlights lampooning bad movies late at night with friends.

 

Roy Cooling

"Bassins" to "Basinns"

"Taken the reigns" to "Taken the reins"

 

Newsies

No longer question Ouroboros and are now excited.

 

Awakened Oppressor bio

"has manifestation of corrupted flesh" "has manifested as corrupted flesh"

 

Atmospheric dialog

"in tact" to "intact"

 

Dr. Stribbling

References to M1dway taking you to Cap au Diable corrected to Port Oakes.

 

Bobby Curtin

"If go after" to "If you go after"

 

Dr. Arvin

"Lost conscious" to "lost consciousness"

 

"Show Flambeaux How It's Done!"

"Need to need to" to "Need to"

 

Yin in "Raid Yin Corp" knows Tilman's proper pronoun.

 

Seer Marino

"The Legacy Chain's" to "The Legacy Chain"

 

Marshal Brass

Vines: "You" to "you" (decapitalized)

 

Fixed 4 places where "Hey there" was "Hey, there,"

 

Diviner Maros

"Chose you, now" to "Choose you, now"

 

Unlucky Pete should now be Unlucky Pete at all times.

[Rudra]

1 hour ago, The Caretaker said:

Alexandra Sideris

"returning these women" to "returing the senators"

I'm really hoping you just had a typo explaining the typo was fixed....

[The Caretaker]

On 12/21/2023 at 10:52 PM, Rudra said:

I'm really hoping you just had a typo explaining the typo was fixed....

I never thought I'd see the day we go meta and you proofread the proofreading notes and find typos about typos.

[Bionic_Flea]

37 minutes ago, The Caretaker said:

I never thought I'd see the day we go meta and you proofread the proofreading notes and find typos about typos.

[Rudra]

1 hour ago, The Caretaker said:

I never thought I'd see the day we go meta and you proofread the proofreading notes and find typos about typos.

Sorry, I don't do it intentionally. And for most people, I would just make note, decipher for my own understanding, and move on. In your case, I'm more concerned it may be a copy of the change/fix, hence my expressed "I'm hoping you had a typo explaining the typo". Again, my apologies.

[The Caretaker]

1 hour ago, Rudra said:

Sorry, I don't do it intentionally. And for most people, I would just make note, decipher for my own understanding, and move on. In your case, I'm more concerned it may be a copy of the change/fix, hence my expressed "I'm hoping you had a typo explaining the typo". Again, my apologies.

I believe in this case I was hand-typing the changelog while making the changes in the data, so it wasn't a copy-paste from the source, thankfully.

 

Although I will double-check. And I'm not offended, no need to apologize. I was astounded by the Inception-level layering we achieved in here 🙂

 

EDIT: "Thank you, {HeroName}. You have done me a great service in returning the senators."

 

...phew.

[lemming]

1 hour ago, The Caretaker said:

I believe in this case I was hand-typing the changelog while making the changes in the data, so it wasn't a copy-paste from the source, thankfully.

 

Although I will double-check. And I'm not offended, no need to apologize. I was astounded by the Inception-level layering we achieved in here 🙂

You got to QA the QA.

[Rudra]

I didn't see this when I did a search, so here goes. On the tip mission "Exotic Armor Schematics" there is an inconsistency in the punctuation. In the mission briefing, there is a section that reads:

'Shorten length of arms' 'Add shield emitter' 'Increase power output' 'Add anti-missile chaff'' 'More plutonium'.

 

The "Add anti-missile chaff" part either has a quotation mark or a double apostrophe where it should be an apostrophe for consistency.

[Tatterhood]

End of Hatchet's last mission as an undercover Loyalist:

Should be either "some Seers" or "some of the Seers", not "some of Seers".

Edited December 31, 2023 by Tatterhood