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[Ridiculous Girl]

introductory mission text for anti-matter in praetoria. the first sentence is a rhetorical question missing its "?"... it should read "Do you know how much work is put on my shoulders, PlayerName?" 😄

 

 

[TheMultiVitamin]

Don't know if it was reported already but in the Dominator archetype description it says "Additionally, each time a Dominator attack, they come closer to unleashing his their true sadistic power of Domination."



I have a habit of regularly reading all the descriptions for everything in character creation, so I might have more to put here soon.

[Mykll]

The Sun buff.  It give +DMG to All, but has it listed as +DMGAll) instead of properly as +DMG(All).  And I guess no period at the end of the last sentence either.

 

Edited October 31 by Mykll

[TheMultiVitamin]

 

Field Operative in the Devices Power Set has the sentence "You use a LCD body coating to become partially invisible." It'd read better if it was instead "You use an LCD body coating to become partially invisible."

[TheMultiVitamin]

Havoc Punch in the Electricity Manipulation power set has the sentence "Havoc Punch can may knock down targets drain some Endurance from your target, or even overload their synapses, leaving them writing for a moment." 

Decent fix could be "Havoc punch can potentially knock down targets drain some Endurance from your target, or even overload their synapses, leaving them writing for a moment."



Another in Electricity Manipulation, Dynamo says "While active, you to regenerate health and recover endurance very quickly."

Edited October 31 by TheMultiVitamin

[ninja surprise]

I just got the Socialite badge, and it has a comma on the wrong side of a space: "or a Tailor ,you will earn"

[ninja surprise]

Redside, doing a tip mission in Grandville, "Teach Flamespout a few lessons about villains", in the final dialog with Flamespout it has "one" misspelled as "oen".

[Troo]

Is it a typo if terminology is interchanged?

 

Most places refer to 'servers' other places are referred to as 'shards'. It seems this can and does cause some confusion.

 

"Transfer you character to another server."

 

"CHARACTER TRANSFER WARNING! NOTE:
Your name is not guaranteed to be available on the new server! Transferring a character to another server cannot be reversed and has the following effects: One server transfer token will be deducted from your account inventory. You will be granted a rename token if your name has to be changed."

 

"Shard XP Boosts

Reunion & Indomitable: 2x

Torchbearer: 1.5x"

 

 

[Ridiculous Girl]

4 hours ago, Troo said:

"Transfer you character to another server."

this is a typo if it is direct copy. 🙂

[shinypretty]

In the CoV "Take down Turovsky and villains" mission, a Luddite Friar says, "And lo! The evil technology was smote!"

 

It's not smote, it's smitten.

[Ridiculous Girl]

7 hours ago, shinypretty said:

It's not smote, it's smitten.

smote is the more common past tense usage of the word smite in this context.

[TheMultiVitamin]

Seismic Blast says "As your Seismic Shockwaves increases, your chance of triggering Seismic Shockwaves increases and the cooldown of other Seismic Blast attacks is slightly reduced."

Should be potentially changed to "As your Seismic Pressure increases, your chance of triggering Seismic Shockwaves increases and the cooldown of other Seismic Blast attacks is slightly reduce."



Additionally, Wild Fortress in Plant Manipulation says "You encase yourself and in a protective barrier that will absorb a moderate amount of damage."

Should be potentially changed to "You encase yourself in a protective barrier that will absorb a moderate amount of damage."



In Sonic Attack, Sirens Song has a note that says "The Sleep component of this power is Auto Hit against regular enemies, but a To Hit check is required to against AV's and players, as well as to make secondary effects apply."

Potentially just get rid of the "to" in the sentence.



The Tactical Arrow power set description says "Gain an advantage in combat with a combination of training techniques that boost your accuracy and movement skills in addition of Tactical Arrows tipped with a variety of payloads, which if used strategically, can dramatically alter a battle site."

Potentially just change that "of" to "to".



Temporal Manipulation's power Time Wall says "You're create time barrier to immobilize a single enemy." 

Potentially change that to "You create a time barrier to immobilize a single enemy."

 

 

Aging Touch in Temporal Manipulation says "Targets affected by the Delayed effect will suffer from a more psionic damage over time."

Potentially change that to "Targets affected by the Delayed effect will suffer from additional psionic damage over time."

Edited November 2 by TheMultiVitamin

[Khrystina]

On 10/17/2024 at 7:23 PM, Rudra said:

This holds true for pretty much every NPC in the game. Whatever character, PC or NPC, that the NPC has targeted, is the name that gets used. Most typically seen during combat when the target is supposed to be saying your character's name at 75%, 50%, 25%, or 10% health when you have teammates and/or pets.

*nods*  I've seen that a lot.  It just seems to me that it should be simple to add a snip of code on those triggers that says (pseudocode):
If (target.IsPet == true)

     Set target := target.Owner

EndIf

[Khrystina]

On 11/2/2024 at 1:38 PM, Ridiculous Girl said:

smote is the more common past tense usage of the word smite in this context.

The link you included goes on to say that "smitten" is the more commonly used past participle form, and that's how it's being used in the context from the original post:  "And lo! The evil technology was smote!"
The players smote the evil technology.

The evil technology was smitten.

 

Man, we are a bunch of grammar wonks in here, aren't we 😄

Edited November 5 by Khrystina

[Ridiculous Girl]

1 hour ago, Khrystina said:

The evil technology was smitten.

i still think you are wrong... simply because of the context, not whether it is grammatically correct or no. 😛

 

the funny thing is that just last night i saw the word in context while reading... one of those odd bits of sychronicity. 🙂

 

 

i propose the word Smoten! 😁

Edited November 5 by Ridiculous Girl
added something :)

[TheMultiVitamin]

During Wilma Petersons Story Arc 'A Hand of Iron' the objective for the second mission is "Bust electronics thief, his crew", maybe adjust that to "Bust/Arrest the electronics thief and his crew."

[TheMultiVitamin]

One of Laurie Pennington's quests, says "You need you to get to Jannissey Heights right away to save Congressman Hadley.", maybe adjust it to "I/We need you to get to Jannissey Heights right away to save Congressman Hadley."

Edited Monday at 07:11 PM by TheMultiVitamin

[AboveTheChemist]

The badge text for 'Adept' reads:

 

Quote

The amount of moral options open to you sometimes leads to complulsary or contradictory decisions, but that's part of the freedom to make choices. You've completed several Alignment Tip missions and made some moral decisions.

 

complulsary should be compulsory I think.

[Khrystina]

 

This is from the "Best Friends Forever" arc, from Bobcat.

My toon was in "female" body type when I ran this mission.  Other places have gender-specific dialogs, so I assume this was just an oversight.

Edited 2 hours ago by Khrystina