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[srmalloy]

On 6/20/2021 at 8:45 AM, wijnen said:

"We're gonna need your help more a lot more" should have less more.

Or amend the punctuation -- "We're going to need your help more -- a lot more -- on this one..."

[Panthonca7034]

While playing Pandora's box, and getting ambushed by Belladonna Vetrano of Primal Earth (Ghost Widow), Arbiter Sands, and Nocturne whilst saving James Harvan; I came across this dialogue bug...

 

 

Then there's a grammar error in the TPN Plaque "None shall silent" should be "None shall silence"

 

 

Then there's this grammar error from a Numina TF I think, I reckon Numina must have eaten a bad batch of tacos 😛 lol, should read "Smoke and Sulfur" since this takes place in Rhode Island

 

 

Sorry it took this long to post, life sort of happened

[SmalltalkJava]

In the combat log for Spirit Ward it was printing out Spriti Ward.

[csr]

Praetorian Loyalist/Power line contact Reese, Rise to Power Part Three: A Spectacle for the Crowd.

 

In paragraph 3 Reese says "Ahem.  If you past Warrant, ..."

 

It should read "Ahem.  If you get past Warrant, ..." or "Ahem.  If you make it past Warrant, ..."

[Sunsette]

From the Contact Ward, in Night Ward

 

choosen --> chosen

[wijnen]

Kyle Peck in Steel Canyon says after a mission:

"nothing sort of brilliant" should be "nothing short of brilliant".

[Uun]

In Martial Assault (Dominator), the descriptive text for Dragon's Tail carried over the text from the Martial Arts version, "This low spinning kick deals slightly more damage than Thunder Kick, but has a chance to hit all enemies in melee range. " As Thunder Kick was buffed for Dominators, this statement is untrue. The Dominator version of Dragon's Tail does less damage than the Dominator version of Thunder Kick.

[Shenanigunner]

An NPC in Pocket D announced to us all that she dances "for the endolphins." Not sure if this is a typo or really bad humor.

Edited July 2, 2021 by Shenanigunner

[wijnen]

In one of Crimson's missions, a clue says "hear" which should in this context be "here".

[srmalloy]

Random NPC dialog in The Hollows:

 

 [NPC] Outcast Initiate Chopper: I'm going to be the snot out of the next guy I see.

 

Should be 'beat the snot', not 'be the snot'.

[ZorkNemesis]

An Unearthly Shard villain tip in the 20s.  The villain option reads: Put down Mangle and take his pieces of the tablet!"  There is an erroneous quotation mark at the end of the line.

 

[wijnen]

In "Find Joe's Records" from Crimson, a clue named "Mrs. Boxer's story" contains this:

"may years" should be "many years".

[Zephyr Star]

Pandora's Box Part 2

 

[ZorkNemesis]

NPC Chatter concerning the Villain outcome of "Sounds of Utter Chaos" tip gets cut off by presumably some character limit.  Plenty of other post mission chatter gets cut off, so there has to be a limit that the original devs never bothered to fix despite it existing for a very long time.

 

[NPC] Quinton: I thought the Isles were chaotic, but did you hear what happened in Founder's Falls? It was a madhouse there! Banks being robbe

 

EDIT: The "Smooth Metal" tip also has a similar NPC chatter for the Villain outcome

 

[NPC] Gale: I'm so ashamed of myself...I found this piece of metal...and then...I woke up the next day...COVERED in blood...but it wasn't m

 

Edited July 9, 2021 by ZorkNemesis

[wijnen]

After killing a knight of Malta, Crimson says:

In the second paragraph, "there have always been an unseen hand" should be "there has ..." (or possibly "they have ...")

Edited July 9, 2021 by wijnen

[srmalloy]

Or "...there have always been unseen hands..."

[Outlaender]

On 2/16/2020 at 2:51 AM, RikOz said:

Story Arc: "A Path Into Darkness

Mission: "Search base for clues"

 

Archon Phillipo, the "boss" at the end of the map, says, "You have learned to much. It will cause you an unfortunate end."

 

That should be "... learned too much."

 

[Sunsette]

End of Levantera's arc in RWZ.

 

Quote

Once again, you do not dissapoint.

 

The last word should be disappoint.

[Sunsette]

End of Serpent Drummer's Arc in RWZ

 

Quote

The information you retrieve has been translated by Mr. Decker.

 

The word retrieve should be past tense: retrieved. 

[Icecomet]

Hello everybody, not sure if this was reported or not, I didn't feel like looking through 31 pages of responses, but, there is a typo (but more realistically a mismatch of a reported powers ability):

 

 

So, not sure if it's superior or minimal, but I think these are mutually exclusive?

 

 

[Outrider_01]

 

All AT with Trick Arrow, both in game description and when selecting powers in the character creator.

 

Blaster secondary, both in game and character creation text.  Sentence seems like it could read with with either "But" or "and" depending on how its read but not both.

 

Completely forgot there was a separate thread for spelling errors.

[Sunsette]

 

Faultline Exploration Tips, the initial page of the contact window

 

it currently reads "They serve the purpose of both attracting donations for the costly construction project, but also spreading awareness of the area's state of affairs."

 

Instead it should read,

 

"They serve the purpose of not only attracting donations for the costly construction project, but also spreading awareness of the area's state of affairs."

 

or 

 

"They serve the purpose of both attracting donations for the costly construction project, and also spreading awareness of the area's state of affairs."

[Sunsette]

Faultline Exploration Tip mish for Escape Artist 

 

If one underestimates Arachnos and their reach, they will regret it.

 

not high priority but the grammar here is overly vague, by using "their" and "they" consecutively to refer to two different nouns. Suggested fixes:

 

If you underestimate Arachnos and their reach, you will regret it.

 

or

 

If one underestimates Arachnos (and their reach), they will regret it.

[Gigajoule]

In What Was Built Upon the Past, Part Three: At All Costs (Sister Solaris' part of the Dark Astoria arc), Sister Solaris says "Daedalus helped guide Marcus Valerius and the small fleet of ships out to sea. I've been tracking the progress but have had a terrible vision."

 

That should be "tracking their progress". Or you could say "tracking the progress of the fleet but...". As written, it is technically grammatical but definitely non-standard usage.

Edited July 18, 2021 by Gigajoule
typo, ironically enough

[Sunsette]

 

Croatoa tips, Jack's Wrath tip.

 

Second line of the poem:

Make for yourself, a circumstance most die!

 

It should probably be

Make for yourself, a circumstance most dire!